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kabhi dekha to hoga na wo sookhe zard se patte
« on: May 06, 2015, 11:18:52 AM »
kabhi dekha to hoga na wo sookhe zard se patte
Shajar se saath jo chute to patte sukh jaate hain

Kisi ke pao ke niche kabhi bhi jab vo aate hain
Bikhar k reza reza wo bahut hi charmarate hain

Uni patto ki manind hai mere beete hue lamhey
Hansu maiN jor se tanha To Aansoo zhilmilate hai

teri in mahfilon main kya byaani ka meri oudha
Kahan awwaz Ab nikle khud he me badbadate hain

Na he unwaan mera hai pata kab hai radeefo ka
mere ashaar hai jo behr main kuch kam hi aate hain

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Re: kabhi dekha to hoga na wo sookhe zard se patte
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2015, 01:00:40 PM »
aapki pahli post ka swagat hai ... jaldi hi aapki lekhni par baapis aati hooN..... aate rahiye
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Re: kabhi dekha to hoga na wo sookhe zard se patte
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2015, 05:19:22 AM »
Uni patto ki manind hai mere beete hue lamhey
Hansu maiN jor se tanha To Aansoo zhilmilate hai

waise to har ashaar aapke lajawaab haiN lekin ye mere dil ke kariib raha.
Swagat hai aapka bahut bahut umdaa'H kalaam raha aapka... ummid hai abhi aapki dher saari khoobsurat rachnayeN hameN padhe ko milegi..
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Re: kabhi dekha to hoga na wo sookhe zard se patte
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2015, 09:30:34 AM »
kabhi dekha to hoga na wo sookhe zard se patte
Shajar se saath jo chute to patte sukh jaate hain

Kisi ke pao ke niche kabhi bhi jab vo aate hain
Bikhar k reza reza wo bahut hi charmarate hain

Uni patto ki manind hai mere beete hue lamhey
Hansu maiN jor se tanha To Aansoo zhilmilate hai

teri in mahfilon main kya byaani ka meri oudha
Kahan awwaz Ab nikle khud he me badbadate hain

Na he unwaan mera hai pata kab hai radeefo ka
mere ashaar hai jo behr main kuch kam hi aate hain

Aprajita- Bhuli Bisri Ek kahani
mera manana hai likhne ka bada maqsad apne ehsaasoN ko doosroN tak pnahuchana hai
or aap is meiN bakhoobi safal hue ho
ek ek ashaar dil ki parat dar parat utarta sa mehsoos hua pahli baar aapko pada bahut achha laga ..aate rahiye intzaar rahega
 
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adiyo meri gaachi mukki
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Re: kabhi dekha to hoga na wo sookhe zard se patte
« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2015, 06:52:54 PM »
apne poore dil se sachche man se ye keh sakta hun ke aap ek umda writer haiN... aur ye ehsaas jinko aap ne lafzoN me is andaaz me bayaaN kiya hai, ye aise ehsaas haiN jinko har bodhijeevi ya sensitive insaan apne apne jeevan me tanha tanha jeher ke ghooNt jaisa peeta rehta hai.. aur inhe bayaaN karna aasaaN nahi hota.... bahot bahot khoob.. bahot badhaai ... share karte rahiye..
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