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anilrana

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Dhiyaan(Betiyan)
« on: January 10, 2015, 12:54:11 PM »
Manwa thandiya chhaawaN
eh jag vich rahen sada

Maa te pahela roop suhana
Na uhda dhiyan te jania jaanda

Putt sada jameena bandawan
Dhiyan sada dookh nu bandawan

Yah jag fer bhi loko beri
koen dhiyan nu pyartarsawai

Eash jag vich yah he duwawan
Dhiyan rahan sada pyariyan
« Last Edit: January 12, 2015, 09:59:22 AM by Rashmi »
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Re: Dhiyaan(Betiyan)
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2015, 10:08:54 AM »
anil ji tuhade bhawaN nu salaam ji ,,beti de kirdaar nu samajhan di haale bhi bahut jaroorat hai samaaj nu ...last waliyaN 4 lines samjhan vich kujh dikkat mehsoos ho rahi hai ,,je ho sake ta dowara likh deo oh ....plzzz
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Re: Dhiyaan(Betiyan)
« Reply #2 on: January 17, 2015, 09:52:18 AM »
har koi dhiyan di kadar kare eh hi dua hai vadhiya message ji