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Taish

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yaadoN ke naqs-e-paa dhuNdhooN...!!
« on: November 23, 2014, 08:00:56 AM »
dil meiN yaadoN ke naqsh-e-paa dhuNdhooN,
tarah tarah aapka pataa dhuNdhooN...

ishq ka marz ho gaya mujhko,
ab maiN marr jaauN ke dawa dhuNdhooN...

aaina mera kehta hai mujhse,
tu to mujhsa hai tujhme kya dhuNdhooN...

husn, aaNkheN, anaa, hayaa, khushboo,
aaj teri adaa adaa dhuNdhooN...

aag dil meiN hai, saaNs bujhne lagi,
ab bataa kaisi maiN hawa dhuNdhooN...

sirf tera hi jiqr hai jisme,
main vo panna kitaab ka dhuNdhooN...

kitna ahmaq hooN maiN bhi dekhiye aap,
dil lagaane ko bewafa dhuNdhooN...

meri deewaangi mohabbat meiN,
khud mein bhi aqs aapka dhuNdhooN...

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Re: yaadoN ke naqs-e-paa dhuNdhooN...!!
« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2014, 10:13:45 AM »
dil meiN yaadoN ke naqsh-e-paa dhuNdhooN,
tarah tarah aapka pataa dhuNdhooN...

ishq ka marz ho gaya mujhko,
ab maiN marr jaauN ke dawa dhuNdhooN...

aaina mera kehta hai mujhse,
tu to mujhsa hai tujhme kya dhuNdhooN...

husn, aaNkheN, anaa, hayaa, khushboo,
aaj teri adaa adaa dhuNdhooN...

aag dil meiN hai, saaNs bujhne lagi,
ab bataa kaisi maiN hawa dhuNdhooN...

sirf tera hi jiqr hai jisme,
main vo panna kitaab ka dhuNdhooN...

kitna ahmaq hooN maiN bhi dekhiye aap,
dil lagaane ko bewafa dhuNdhooN...

meri deewaangi mohabbat meiN,
khud mein bhi aqs aapka dhuNdhooN...
bahut der baad hindvi ki yaad aai  lucky boy... koi ni aai to sahi... bahut khoobsoorat bhav bhari ghazal le ke aae ho...iske liye dheroN mubarak hoN...god bless
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Fikr

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Re: yaadoN ke naqs-e-paa dhuNdhooN...!!
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2014, 02:18:21 PM »
aaina mera kehta hai mujhse,
tu to mujhsa hai tujhme kya dhuNdhooN..

ये शेर बहुत अच्छा है भाई
लाख करोड़ दाद इसके लिए

Taish

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Re: yaadoN ke naqs-e-paa dhuNdhooN...!!
« Reply #3 on: November 24, 2014, 05:25:51 AM »
shukriya rashmi ji hausla afzaayi ke liye....

Aur mirza saaheb dil ko tassalli hui ki aapko sher pasand aaya, bas yuNhi pyar banaaye rakheN...

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Re: yaadoN ke naqs-e-paa dhuNdhooN...!!
« Reply #4 on: November 24, 2014, 06:41:11 AM »
bahut bahut khoob ...har ek sher lajawaab..behtareen Ghazal..:)