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ridham

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kaisa naata
« on: November 05, 2014, 06:32:01 PM »
kya nata hai tumse
kab samajh paai hooN
aksar khud se poochti hooN swaal
to man kahta hai
ke wo jo kabhi kisi ka nahi hua
aisa nata jo aaj tak bana hi nahi tha
naya bilkul saaf kore kagaj sa
ek meetha ehsaas tumse milne ka
ek dard tumse vichhudne ka
ek chaah tumse har samaya guftgoo ki
ek pyaas tumheiN nazaron ke samaksh rakhne ki
ek peeda ,,tumhaari peeda ki
or ek unmad tumhari khushi ka
sab kuchh tera hi to hai
mera kya hai
phir sochti hooN
too jo hai mera
shayad kai sau janmoN se
or kai sau janmoN tak
kisi bandhan se pare
phir bhi bandha hua sa
yahi to hai mera tera naata
haan bus yahi to hai

Rashmi

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Re: kaisa naata
« Reply #1 on: November 06, 2014, 03:40:56 AM »
Sach meiN bahut pyara nata hai .
Rooh ke uljhe jungle meiN
Kaise paudhe rope toone

KaantoN ke sang phool khile haiN

Kuchh aise hi ehsaas haiN


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adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

Aanchal

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Re: kaisa naata
« Reply #2 on: November 07, 2014, 06:10:27 PM »
Bohut maasuum aur hassass nazm likhi hai..!!
Bahatreen andaaz e bayaaN. :)
« Last Edit: November 07, 2014, 06:12:19 PM by Aanchal »

ridham

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Re: kaisa naata
« Reply #3 on: November 20, 2014, 05:36:52 AM »
Sach meiN bahut pyara nata hai .
Rooh ke uljhe jungle meiN
Kaise paudhe rope toone

KaantoN ke sang phool khile haiN

Kuchh aise hi ehsaas haiN
waaah   thanku ji  :)

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Re: kaisa naata
« Reply #4 on: November 20, 2014, 05:42:23 AM »
Waah Bahut Khoob.. :)

ridham

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Re: kaisa naata
« Reply #5 on: November 30, 2014, 09:48:08 AM »
Bohut maasuum aur hassass nazm likhi hai..!!
Bahatreen andaaz e bayaaN. :)
shukriya aanchal ji :)