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Rashmi

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bachpan
« on: July 20, 2014, 06:32:38 PM »
Main kithon mod liawan
Oh bachpan de pal saare
Jad vehde de vich sounde
Te raati gin de taare.

Jad waqat shaam daa hunda
Assi ja kothe te chad de
Kathian krke akhwaran
Ohnu gol roll vich bann de

Phir chounk ch si ohnu sutde
Te luk-2 ohnu takde
Koi kheton aundi swani*                       *aurat
Ohnu aakh vcha ke chuk di
Mallak jehe phir usnu
Sir tokkre* de vich dhardi                     *sir te rarkhya tokkra

Kuj agge kadam vdhaundi
Phir edher udher si takkdi
Us chukke hoey gathde nu
Oh tokkre vichon kad di

Oh jiun-2 us nu khole
Kagaj te kagaj nikklan
Assi jor-2 di hassde
Oh sannu gaalan kad di

Oh phir agahan* nu vadhdi               *aagge*
Assi ohio kagaj chukk de
Te phir mashakat karde

Jad miinh* da paani khad da              *varish
Kagaj di kishti bnounde
Farji insaan bathounde
phir usnu disha dikhaunde

kade band gate* de hethon               *school da gate
tidh bhaar aander lang jande
rukhan diyan khodan* vichon             *khuddan
totee de bachche kad liaunde

potte* vich daane dikhde                    *pait
assi aakhan vich muskaunde
phir badi hifajat de naa
ohnu othe hi rakh aunde

ajj kithe gaye oh din ne ?
ajj bachpan oho jiha naa
naa maasi ,chachi, bhooa
hun kathian ho ke baithan
har rishta aunti vich samaya
milbartan oho jiha naa

naa koii kise ghar jaanda
naa koii kise daa khanda
har ikk rasoi nu hun
hai barger pizza mehkanda

mere punjab de ballade*                *baalak
naa gabharu uchche lambe
naa khedan khido khundi**
naa khedan peel palange**

naa khedan kali pili deeti**
naa khedan lookan mitti**
naa khedan itt spittan**
naa khedan dhupp te chawan**                           *punjab vichkhedian jaan wallian kuj khedan
eh khedan udd pudd gayian
jiun din chade pichon parchawan

har vele computer te bahinde
waqat gavounde saara
ja oh rehan mobile nu chimbde
ja har dam chadya paara

naa oh ghar ton bahar nikklan
na ghar waale nikklan dende
hun bharosa tutt giya hai
band darwajean piche rehnde

naa koi dhee bhain hun saanji
na koi kise di raakhi
aapna hi aapne nu khaawe
bass mauka ikk thiawe

main kithon mod liawan
oh bachpan de pal saare…..
main kithon mod liawan
oh bachpan de pal saare…..
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

Rashmi

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Re: bachpan
« Reply #1 on: July 22, 2014, 04:43:28 PM »
Bahut pyaari nazm hai ...
शुक्रिया जी
Magar aapne ek jagah kamaal kar diya hai
Jab puraane thought mein ek nayapan de dita jata hai

Bachpan main kashti bana utna hi puarana thought hai shayri mein jitna khud bachan....
Magar aaone jo farzi insaan bitha diye waah.... waah बेहद शुक्रिया जी

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Jad miinh* da paani khad da              *varish
Kagaj di kishti bnounde
Farji insaan bathounde
phir usnu disha dikhaunde

Ek sher apna yaad aaya bachapan par

WO BACHPAN KI AADAT KAHAN KHO GAYEE
YAHI CHAHIYE AUR ... ABHI CHAHIYE
पर मैंने कभी जिद्द की ही नहीं थी हाँ अब सोचती हूँ की क्यों नी की करनी चाहिए थी ,,,पता नहीं था जिद्द पुगाने वाले ज्यादा देर साथ नी  देंगे ,,,,,नहीं तो शायद हर तम्मना पूरी करती पूरी जिद्द से
TC....
u too ji
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: bachpan
« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2014, 09:36:23 PM »
mujhe ye language samajh me toH nahi aati lekin achchha laga padh ke :-))
मोमिन न मैं फ़िराक न ग़ालिब न मीर हूँ
इक आग का गोला हूँ मैं अर्जुन का तीर हूँ

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Re: bachpan
« Reply #3 on: July 28, 2014, 06:31:31 PM »
mujhe ye language samajh me toH nahi aati lekin achchha laga padh ke :-))
shukriya saagar
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale