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ridham

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poora chaand
« on: July 04, 2014, 05:57:20 PM »
jab man khush hota ha
To sab sundar dikhaai deta hai
Ghar ke kisi kaam se market nikli to dekha
Street lights ke uppar hazzaroN
Machchar....bareek  breek
Or wo aise lag rahe the jaise
Koi chashma ho
Kuchh aage gai to bahut sundar chand dikhai diya
Are...par mujhe ye aadha kyoN dikhai de raha hai
Mere man ka chaand to ajj poora hai...gol..khushrang...shayad khushi ke aansu
Aankhe dhundla gaye ....ya phir ye bhi ho sakta hai..aadha tum le gaye ho...kisi ko dene ko...chor kahiN ke...mujhe mera chaand poora chahiye..khusrang chaand...khushiyaN bikherta khushiyaN batorta sa...do ge na baapis mera chaand
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Re: poora chaand
« Reply #1 on: July 09, 2014, 06:36:14 PM »
jab man khush hota ha
To sab sundar dikhaai deta hai
Ghar ke kisi kaam se market nikli to dekha
Street lights ke uppar hazzaroN
Machchar....bareek  breek
Or wo aise lag rahe the jaise
Koi chashma ho
Kuchh aage gai to bahut sundar chand dikhai diya
Are...par mujhe ye aadha kyoN dikhai de raha hai
Mere man ka chaand to ajj poora hai...gol..khushrang...shayad khushi ke aansu
Aankhe dhundla gaye ....ya phir ye bhi ho sakta hai..aadha tum le gaye ho...kisi ko dene ko...chor kahiN ke...mujhe mera chaand poora chahiye..khusrang chaand...khushiyaN bikherta khushiyaN batorta sa...do ge na baapis mera chaand
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indicated line achchhi lagi.. :))
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ridham

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Re: poora chaand
« Reply #2 on: January 17, 2015, 10:04:11 AM »
shukriya saagar aaksar mujhe jwaab nahi milte aap  ko koi line pasand aai shukriya aapka sil se shukriya