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Rashmi

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vekho ni
« on: July 04, 2014, 05:31:36 PM »
vekho ni ajj koi
ruThDA yaar manavan chaliyaa
vekho ni oh dheedo raanja
pyaar nibhavan chaliya

hath vich maiN da kaasa fadiya
sabraN da tan jhagga chadiya
jajwaataN naal har pal laDiya
yaadaN di hath faD ke taswi,
khair puaawan chaliya

vekho ni ajj koi
ruThDa yaar manawan chaliya

dewo ni ohnu dewo duaawaN
khull jaawan je chaaro rahwaN
murshad nu arzoi paawaN
vekho ni ajj ban ke sudama
krishan manawan challiya

vekho ni ajj koi
ruThDa yaar manawan chaliya


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gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: vekho ni
« Reply #1 on: July 08, 2014, 04:41:05 PM »
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Re: vekho ni
« Reply #2 on: July 11, 2014, 03:48:59 PM »
Rashmi ji .
Bhavna bahut achi laggi ..koshish vi keeti tusi ruthra yaan
manavan di...per man di fatti paren tau baad  eh rachna kuch fiqqi
lagi ...Bura na manana  ...
Man di fatti tau baad sadiya umeedan bahut wadh gayiana tuhade kolon.

Is layi tuhadi navi peshkash da intezaar rahega..vaise tusi ruhani jama
pehnan di vi koshish keeti is kavita jo changi laggi.

Sanjay Sehgal

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Re: vekho ni
« Reply #3 on: July 13, 2014, 09:26:35 AM »
Rashmi ji .
Bhavna bahut achi laggi ..koshish vi keeti tusi ruthra yaan
manavan di..
Sanjay ji :)  maine kisi ko dekha is koshish meiN...to uski beintha koshish dekh achhanak hi ye shaad jehan meiN goonjne lage. .per man di fatti paren tau baad  eh rachna kuch fiqqi
lagi ...Bura na manana  ...
Man di fatti tau baad sadiya umeedan bahut wadh gayiana tuhade kolon.

Is layi tuhadi navi peshkash da intezaar rahega..vaise tusi ruhani jama
pehnan di vi koshish keeti is kavita jo changi laggi.

Sanjay Sehgal
aap ki ummideiN hamaare sir maathe....koshish karte raheinge behtar likhne ki ....aapke comments ka intzaar rahta hai...akkharaN di kheti  pe bhi nazreinayat kareiN ji...or koi to punjaabi paDta nahi
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale