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hamdam

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Teri Yaad Ayee
« on: July 03, 2014, 03:42:17 PM »
Aj saanjh dhale teri yaad ayee ,
Jab chand ne phir li angrayee.

Tere pyar ke kisse yaad aye ,
jab badal ne boondein barsayee.

Nit  rain main tare ginta rehta hun,
 mere sapnon mein tumhi samayee

mere dil mein tum hi basti ho ,
har dharkan deti hai ye gawahee.

Teri preet kabhi na chootegi ,
waqt ne baat hai samjhayee.

Hai door agar hum zismon se ,
Mann mein sanjh hai bharpayee

Milna aur bichadrna hai reet jag ki ,
Ab mohe khalti na teri judaee.

Taish

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Re: Teri Yaad Ayee
« Reply #1 on: July 03, 2014, 03:46:41 PM »
are wah humare angrezi ke poet saaheb ne ghazaloN ki taraf rukh kiyaa hai aur vo bhi gair muradif, ab hum jaise jod tod waale shayar kahaan jaayenge...   bahut ahcha prayas hai sire ji, bas yunhi ehsashon ko syahi banaate rahiye...... :)

hamdam

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Re: Teri Yaad Ayee
« Reply #2 on: July 03, 2014, 04:43:18 PM »
Lucky bhai ,

Tumhe dekh kar khushi hui....aur acha laga jaan kar ki meri likhi
hui rachnayein padne layak ho gayi hai .. Thanx bro for appauding me.

sanjay sehgal

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Re: Teri Yaad Ayee
« Reply #3 on: July 03, 2014, 05:00:18 PM »
bahut hi badhiya roomani nazm..mubaraqbaad

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Re: Teri Yaad Ayee
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2014, 05:15:13 PM »
Aj saanjh dhale teri yaad ayee ,
Jab chand ne phir li angrayee.

Tere pyar ke kisse yaad aye ,
jab badal ne boondein barsayee.

Nit  rain main tare ginta rehta hun,
 mere sapnon mein tumhi samayee

mere dil mein tum hi basti ho ,
har dharkan deti hai ye gawahee.

Teri preet kabhi na chootegi ,
waqt ne baat hai samjhayee.

Hai door agar hum zismon se ,
Mann mein sanjh hai bharpayee

Milna aur bichadrna hai reet jag ki ,
Ab mohe khalti na teri judaee.
Sanjay ji jo bahut khoobsoorat ehsaas piroye haiN aapne ,,,,kaafi der baad aapko pada achha laga ,,,aate rahiye apna khyaal rakhiye
Rashmi Sharma

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