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Rashmi

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Re: Gulzar ki triveni
« Reply #60 on: July 06, 2014, 10:36:12 AM »
Bas, hawaa hi bharee hai goloN meiN
suee chubh jaaye to pichak jaayeN
log gussE meiN bum nahiN bantE !


Kya class triveni hai.. aahaa ...
Ghazab..

Thank for sharing rashmi ji

Bas sher k baad ek line ka break den fir teesra misra thoda padhne main triveni hi ka naza aana chahiye
thanku vikas ,,,,sabhi edit kar di gai haiN
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Re: Gulzar ki triveni
« Reply #61 on: July 15, 2014, 11:27:08 AM »
sitaare chaaNd ki kishti meiN raat laati hai
sahar ke aane se pahle hi bik bhi jaate haiN

bahut hii achchaa hai vyopaar in dino shab ka
Rashmi Sharma

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Re: Gulzar ki triveni
« Reply #62 on: July 15, 2014, 11:43:36 AM »
bus ikk paani ki aawaaz laplapaati hai
ki ghaat chhod ke maanjhi tamaam ja bhi chuke

chalo na chaNd ki kashti meiN jheel paar kareiN
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Re: Gulzar ki triveni
« Reply #63 on: July 15, 2014, 11:46:36 AM »
khafa raheiN bah hameshaaN to kuchh nahi hota
kabhi kabhi jo mile aankheiN foot paDti haiN

BataayeiN kis ki BahaaroN meiN dard hota hai
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Re: Gulzar ki triveni
« Reply #64 on: July 15, 2014, 11:48:16 AM »
log meloN meiN bhi gum ho kar mile haiN barha
daastaano ke kisi dilchasap se ikk moD par

youN hameshaN ke liye bhi kya bichhaDta hai koi
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Re: Gulzar ki triveni
« Reply #65 on: July 15, 2014, 11:50:17 AM »
aap ki khaatir agar hum loot bhi leiN aasmaN
kya milega chaNd chamkiile se sheeshe toD ke

chaaNd chubh jaayega ungli meiN to khoon aa jaayega
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Re: Gulzar ki triveni
« Reply #66 on: July 15, 2014, 11:51:59 AM »
pau footi hai or kirno se kaaNch vaze haiN
ghar jaane ka waqt hua hai paanch vaze haiN

saari shab ghadiyaal ne chaukidaari ki hai
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Re: Gulzar ki triveni
« Reply #67 on: November 05, 2014, 01:46:01 PM »
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Re: Gulzar ki triveni
« Reply #68 on: November 05, 2014, 01:51:14 PM »


वाअह्ह्ह क्या ही उम्दा
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