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ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Will It Ever Stop?
« on: June 18, 2014, 11:44:21 AM »
Will it ever stop??

No matter how much I try
There is no end to it
I keep wiping it away
But there is a river of it

They seem to have no end
Even though it is at one spot
They dont have a voice
But they do speak a lot

There is no reason for it
Not that I can think of
There is no outcome of it
Now that I can think straight

They look like sparkling pearls
My God they are so rare
But are they worth falling
For someone who doesn't care

How is it possible for someone so close
To give a gift flowing like a waterfall
There is no end to the flow
Look! How they make the cheeks glow

When is it going to recede
When will I again walk tall
Will they even ever stop
Oh! When will the tears not again fall

*Madhoo*
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

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Re: Will It Ever Stop?
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2014, 12:03:19 PM »
Ye aansu kabhi nahi rukte madhu ji...kabhi dukh mein kabhi sukh mein. ...

Bahut achhe se shingara hai aapne aansuoN ko .gaaloN pe..... jiske liye waheiN agar wo mulya jaan jaaye to ....sach meiN alankrit ho uThte haiN ye moti

Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

Venus Sandal

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Re: Will It Ever Stop?
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2014, 04:32:09 PM »
Aaaa..madhu ji

Its sooooooo beautifulllllllll

Lovlyyy

Nd yesss..it will definitely stop dear...believe me..

zoya****

Lau  hi lau sii ..... saik nhi si
Vekh lya main jugnu phd ke
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Re: Will It Ever Stop?
« Reply #3 on: July 03, 2014, 11:58:51 AM »
ahaaaa very well expressed, felt gr8 to read, had the flow and feelings it very gud proportions, ud actually start hymning it.... Do keep writing more maam...!!

ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Re: Will It Ever Stop?
« Reply #4 on: July 04, 2014, 03:42:09 AM »
Thank you all for reading it
Much appreciated !!
Thanks for the well wishes Zoya
You said it right Reshmi
Bless you all
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

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Re: Will It Ever Stop?
« Reply #5 on: August 05, 2014, 01:02:08 PM »
:)
zoya****

Lau  hi lau sii ..... saik nhi si
Vekh lya main jugnu phd ke
:-Meesa.

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Re: Will It Ever Stop?
« Reply #6 on: August 15, 2014, 04:19:39 PM »
wow.. Madhu ji.. keep writing and sharing.. there is a natural flow in your expression... would love to read more..
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