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Naye poet ke liye shayri ke padav / steps
« on: June 08, 2014, 03:43:19 PM »
Dear Friends ,

Koi bhi naya kaam shuru karien tau kuch questions aate hai dimag mein pele , Jaise kisi jagah jana ho tau vahan ka rasta , distance and raste ke milestones for driving  pata hon tau rasta aasan ho jata hai .

Ab poetry / shayari likhna koi aasan baat nahin hai , yeh ek hunar hai  or God gift hai . Shuru mein jo dil mein
aya likh diya kagaz pe , ya yun kahein ki apne ehsaason ko utara kalam se . Dheere 2 jaise likhte gaye  , aap ki  lekhni mein polishing aati gayi aur mashq karte rehne se nikhar aya .

Ab Purane majhe hue Poets ko humari adaayein bachkana lagti hain. Per vo humein encourage karte hai taanki
dheere dheere humein ye maaluum pare ki  hum theek likh rahe hai ya galat.

Ab aati hai disha nirdesh ki baari ..ki humein niyam kanoon bataye jaate hain ki bhai jo likh rahe ho usko hadon mein bandho tau aur behtar banega ...

yeh haddien ...
Takti , Behr , meter , radeef , quafiya se shuru hoti hain ....
Phir Shayri ke anek roop  Ghazal , Nazm aur Rubaayee  hote hain .
Aur bhi bariquian hoti hai jo ki dheere dheere  naya budding poet aware hota hai , kuch smajh mein aata hai
aur kuch se vo ghabrata hai , aisa maine khud ke liye mehsoos kiya ..

Agar Hindvi sirf manjhe hue Shayaron ka hi forum hai , tau uper ki saari baatein bemayane hain . Per Insaan jitna bhi kabil ho jaye taumr seekhta hai ..

 Is taraf ek effort seekhane ki humare Buzurg Shayar "Sarwar Raz "ji ne ki thi pichle saal  aur agar vo mera ye lekh parein , tau main unse phir se aane ki darkhuast karunga.


Tab tak meri Sh Vikas se guzarish hai ki vo aage aa ke budding poets ko guide karein aur unki choti se choti
galtiyan sudharein . Yakken jniye  naye shayar ko to ye bhi pata nahi hota ki vo kitni galtiyan kar raha hai,

Adarniya Rashmi ji ka bahut yogdaan hai is hindivi ke liye . Ya yun kahein vo ise apne bachche ki tarah  dekh rekh karti hai . Main unki aur Vikas ji effort ki sarahna karta hun aur umeed karta hun ki ye hindi roopi podha
jo ki July 2013 mein lagaya gaya tha , phoole aur phale aur isme bahut se kaviyon aur shayaron ka sagam ho.

Vikas ji ka Sapna hai ki shayri ko khoop bulandi pe le jaana hai , aao hum sub mil ke unke is karavaan mein shamil hokar aage barein .

Ek aur Guzarish hai ki is site pe  live chat ho ya helpline no ho ( with timings to call specified) jisme  koi bhi shayri ke apne doubts clear kar sake .

Jane se pehle kisi shayar ki lines kahunga sab shayars  naye aur purane dono ke liye .....

KATHIN HAI RAHGUZAR  THORI DOOR SAATH CHALO,
BAHUT PARA HAI SAFAR THORI DOOR SAATH CHALO ,
TAMAM UMR KAHAN KOI SAATH DETA HAI ,
MAIN JANTA HUN MAGAR THORI DOOR SAATH CHALO.

Apka apna hamdam ,

Sanjay Sehgal
 
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Sahil

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Re: Naye poet ke liye shayri ke padav / steps
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2014, 07:09:28 PM »
Waah bahut badhiya.. aao is prayas ko safal banayein

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Re: Naye poet ke liye shayri ke padav / steps
« Reply #2 on: June 08, 2014, 07:36:07 PM »
wwahhh..behad masarrat ki baat hai....koshishen zaroor kaamyaab hongi

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Re: Naye poet ke liye shayri ke padav / steps
« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2014, 03:01:44 AM »
I am in

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Re: Naye poet ke liye shayri ke padav / steps
« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2014, 04:10:14 AM »
Dear Friends ,

Koi bhi naya kaam shuru karien tau kuch questions aate hai dimag mein pele , Jaise kisi jagah jana ho tau vahan ka rasta , distance and raste ke milestones for driving  pata hon tau rasta aasan ho jata hai .

Ab poetry / shayari likhna koi aasan baat nahin hai , yeh ek hunar hai  or God gift hai . Shuru mein jo dil mein
aya likh diya kagaz pe , ya yun kahein ki apne ehsaason ko utara kalam se . Dheere 2 jaise likhte gaye  , aap ki  lekhni mein polishing aati gayi aur mashq karte rehne se nikhar aya .

Ab Purane majhe hue Poets ko humari adaayein bachkana lagti hain. Per vo humein encourage karte hai taanki
dheere dheere humein ye maaluum pare ki  hum theek likh rahe hai ya galat.

Ab aati hai disha nirdesh ki baari ..ki humein niyam kanoon bataye jaate hain ki bhai jo likh rahe ho usko hadon mein bandho tau aur behtar banega ...

yeh haddien ...
Takti , Behr , meter , radeef , quafiya se shuru hoti hain ....
Phir Shayri ke anek roop  Ghazal , Nazm aur Rubaayee  hote hain .
Aur bhi bariquian hoti hai jo ki dheere dheere  naya budding poet aware hota hai , kuch smajh mein aata hai
aur kuch se vo ghabrata hai , aisa maine khud ke liye mehsoos kiya ..

Agar Hindvi sirf manjhe hue Shayaron ka hi forum hai , tau uper ki saari baatein bemayane hain . Per Insaan jitna bhi kabil ho jaye taumr seekhta hai ..

 Is taraf ek effort seekhane ki humare Buzurg Shayar "Sarwar Raz "ji ne ki thi pichle saal  aur agar vo mera ye lekh parein , tau main unse phir se aane ki darkhuast karunga.

Sanjay ji bilkul sahi farma rahe hain aap...aap ki har baat se poori tarah se sahmat hoon ...agar sarwar ji aayeiN to sone pe suhaga hoga....hum koshish karenge unhe baapis laane ki 
Tab tak meri Sh Vikas se guzarish hai ki vo aage aa ke budding poets ko guide karein aur unki choti se choti
galtiyan sudharein . Yakken jniye  naye shayar ko to ye bhi pata nahi hota ki vo kitni galtiyan kar raha hai,
[bilkul main aap se sahmat hoon vikas se main bhi anurodh karti hoon ke vo apni vyasat dincharya ke bavjood...ye karyabhaar sambhaaleiN.../color]
Adarniya Rashmi ji ka bahut yogdaan hai is hindivi ke liye . Ya yun kahein vo ise apne bachche ki tarah  dekh rekh karti hai . Main unki aur Vikas ji effort ki sarahna karta hun aur umeed karta hun ki ye hindi roopi podha
jo ki July 2013 mein lagaya gaya tha , phoole aur phale aur isme bahut se kaviyon aur shayaron ka sagam ho.aap ne jo sanmaan diya uske liye main shukarguzaar hoon...par yaad rakhiye aap sab ka saath hai to ye mashakat youn hi chalti rahegi...verna main akeli kis kaam ki

Vikas ji ka Sapna hai ki shayri ko khoop bulandi pe le jaana hai , aao hum sub mil ke unke is karavaan mein shamil hokar aage barein .
karvaaN jo chal
ManjileiN milti rahengi

Ek aur Guzarish hai ki is site pe  live chat ho ya helpline no ho ( with timings to call specified) jisme  koi bhi shayri ke apne doubts clear kar sake .
agar ye technically possible hua to jaroor dhyaan diya jayega
Jane se pehle kisi shayar ki lines kahunga sab shayars  naye aur purane dono ke liye .....

KATHIN HAI RAHGUZAR  THORI DOOR SAATH CHALO,
BAHUT PARA HAI SAFAR THORI DOOR SAATH CHALO ,
TAMAM UMR KAHAN KOI SAATH DETA HAI ,
MAIN JANTA HUN MAGAR THORI DOOR SAATH CHALO.

Apka apna hamdam ,

Sanjay Sehgal
hum saath saath haiN     :)   
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: Naye poet ke liye shayri ke padav / steps
« Reply #5 on: June 09, 2014, 06:36:50 AM »
Dear Vikas ,

how  to open the helpline aur helpchat   for querries.
Baki sare kaam abhi.shuru karein ..Aap humein lead karna
shuru karein

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Re: Naye poet ke liye shayri ke padav / steps
« Reply #6 on: June 09, 2014, 08:08:12 AM »
Clap!clap ! Clap

Thanx...
zoya****

Lau  hi lau sii ..... saik nhi si
Vekh lya main jugnu phd ke
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Re: Naye poet ke liye shayri ke padav / steps
« Reply #7 on: August 11, 2014, 06:12:41 PM »
thx