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Reeta tyagi

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Re: tum
« Reply #15 on: June 11, 2014, 04:52:23 PM »
Waah Rashmiji.... :))
antim salaam lelo
'rashmi' kahaN kahaN tum

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« Reply #16 on: June 12, 2014, 05:16:57 PM »
Rashmi ji..gazal to pyaari he hi..u r very good listener too

Keep doin good job
shukriya venus .... aaj do do   :)  :)
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« Reply #17 on: June 19, 2014, 09:26:35 AM »
Khoobsoorat ghazal
shukriya sahil ....ye do shabad hi or likhne ko prerit karte hain
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« Reply #18 on: November 24, 2014, 02:46:13 AM »
Waah Rashmiji.... :))
antim salaam lelo
'rashmi' kahaN kahaN tum
shukriya meharbaan aate rahiye
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adiyo meri gaachi mukki
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vsm1978

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« Reply #19 on: December 02, 2014, 04:40:44 AM »
khud hi sitam karo ho
khud hi kaho saza tum-waah

ye saans hai ruki si
ho vaid au dava tum- wahhhh

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« Reply #20 on: December 18, 2014, 06:07:42 PM »
waah waah... kya khoob sher hain.. ek ek sher lajawaab... wallah!

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Re: tum
« Reply #21 on: December 19, 2014, 04:20:24 PM »
khud hi sitam karo ho
khud hi kaho saza tum-waah

ye saans hai ruki si
ho vaid au dava tum- wahhhh
shukriya Vijay ji ...aate rahiye ji khush rahiye  :)
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adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale