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zindgi
« on: August 13, 2013, 12:44:59 PM »
zindgi ikk haadsa te haadse ne zindgi
na jaane kis moR utte ruk  jaawe  eh zindgi

Kishti ch kar suraakh tu chappu chala ke vekh
kaun kehnda Dubb jawan to ruk jaawe eh zindgi

Mitti da mor banke je tu meenh painde vich nachana
khur jawan to dass kiweiN fir ruk jaawe eh zindgi

SahhaN di lambi dor hai chaldi rahe je taaN
naa jaane kehRi ghaRi bus ruk jaawe eh zindgi


« Last Edit: August 13, 2013, 12:59:05 PM by Rashmi sharma »
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Re: zindgi
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2013, 04:17:34 PM »
atti.......sunder....

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Re: zindgi
« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2013, 06:59:44 PM »
Waah rashmi ji!!....bht hi kamal di gal kahi hai tuhadi es poem vich
je jeena hai taan has k jiyo
pta ni kado khatam ho jave eh Zindgi

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Re: zindgi
« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2013, 03:46:50 AM »


Kishti ch kar suraakh tu chappu chala ke vekh
kaun kehnda Dubb jawan to ruk jaawe eh zindgi

Mitti da mor banke je tu meenh painde vich nachana
khur jawan to dass kiweiN fir ruk jaawe eh zindgi




very nice lines :)

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Re: zindgi
« Reply #4 on: September 04, 2013, 02:14:16 AM »
wah kamal kar dita rashmi punjabi vich enne sareleta naal eenni gaheri soch nu duboo ke ru ba ru karwaya eash kalam layee tenu mein hatts off kareda haan bahoot achai rab tenu eidan kalam de rosheni naal nawajai har dam
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Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.

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Re: zindgi
« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2013, 08:23:16 AM »
atti.......sunder....
shukriya sushil ji aate rahiye ji
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Re: zindgi
« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2013, 08:26:39 AM »
Waah rashmi ji!!....bht hi kamal di gal kahi hai tuhadi es poem vich
je jeena hai taan has k jiyo
pta ni kado khatam ho jave eh Zindgi
shukriya angee ji is nimaani nu maan bakhshiya tuhada bahut dhannwad ji
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Re: zindgi
« Reply #7 on: September 13, 2013, 10:53:59 AM »
wah kamal kar dita rashmi punjabi vich enne sareleta naal eenni gaheri soch nu duboo ke ru ba ru karwaya eash kalam layee tenu mein hatts off kareda haan bahoot achai rab tenu eidan kalam de rosheni naal nawajai har dam
shukriya anil ji meri lekhani nu aina maan bakshiya   eidaN hi meri koshishan nu parde raho shayad main bhi likhana sikh jawan
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Re: zindgi
« Reply #8 on: September 15, 2013, 01:48:49 PM »
wah kamal kar dita rashmi punjabi vich enne sareleta naal eenni gaheri soch nu duboo ke ru ba ru karwaya eash kalam layee tenu mein hatts off kareda haan bahoot achai rab tenu eidan kalam de rosheni naal nawajai har dam
shukriya anil ji meri lekhani nu aina maan bakshiya   eidaN hi meri koshishan nu parde raho shayad main bhi likhana sikh jawan

Shabdon mein kya tareef karoon aap ki,
aap shabdon mein kahan bandh paayengeeeeeeeeeeeee.
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Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.

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Re: zindgi
« Reply #9 on: September 17, 2013, 08:44:44 AM »
Too good :) Too good
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Re: zindgi
« Reply #10 on: September 17, 2013, 12:05:33 PM »
wah kamal kar dita rashmi punjabi vich enne sareleta naal eenni gaheri soch nu duboo ke ru ba ru karwaya eash kalam layee tenu mein hatts off kareda haan bahoot achai rab tenu eidan kalam de rosheni naal nawajai har dam
shukriya anil ji meri lekhani nu aina maan bakshiya   eidaN hi meri koshishan nu parde raho shayad main bhi likhana sikh jawan

Shabdon mein kya tareef karoon aap ki,
aap shabdon mein kahan bandh paayengeeeeeeeeeeeee.
zarranawaaji ke liye shukriya ji
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gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
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