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ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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The Perfect Face?
« on: August 11, 2013, 11:35:02 AM »

Your face may not be perfect
It may not be exciting and sharp
You may not have  hard features
To me you are as perfect as a harp

I say you are the most apeealing
Your lips are just as luscious
Your cheekbones are high
Your expressions just as sensuous


You have a hard face
Seeing you people cower
For me you are the softest
And you are all I desire

Looking deep into your eyes
Sitting close to you on the sand
And see the emotions seep through
As I touch your face with my bare hand

Your skin is not flawless
You have scars that are deep
I love to run my fingers
And see the impression they make

It is my deepest desire
To kiss those scars away
To make you look with my eyes
And see how perfect you are in every way


Never think you are ugly
For beauty is skin deep
Never think you are repelling
Coz you're as handsome
as anyone can be

If I had to choose
Between a handsome face
and you
Without a second's hesitation
I will happily  choose you.

- A. M-
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

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Re: The Perfect Face?
« Reply #1 on: August 11, 2013, 02:28:47 PM »
Dear Madhoo ,

You are wonderful...as you look beneath the skin and your poem was really wonderful.

I shall post my poem beauty written more or less with same thought as yours .. May be you shall
feel that my poem is  an extention of yours , althugh I worte it around 25 years ago,

sanjay sehgal

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Re: The Perfect Face?
« Reply #2 on: August 11, 2013, 05:08:46 PM »

Your face may not be perfect
It may not be exciting and sharp
You may not have  hard features
To me you are as perfect as a harp

I say you are the most apeealing
Your lips are just as luscious
Your cheekbones are high
Your expressions just as sensuous


You have a hard face
Seeing you people cower
For me you are the softest
And you are all I desire

Looking deep into your eyes
Sitting close to you on the sand
And see the emotions seep through
As I touch your face with my bare hand

Your skin is not flawless
You have scars that are deep
I love to run my fingers
And see the impression they make

It is my deepest desire
To kiss those scars away
To make you look with my eyes
And see how perfect you are in every way


Never think you are ugly
For beauty is skin deep
Never think you are repelling
Coz you're as handsome
as anyone can be

If I had to choose
Between a handsome face
and you
Without a second's hesitation
I will happily  choose you.

- A. M-
just awesome creation madhu ji, such a wonderfull thaught process u have got! no words---- ,no doubt this poetry shows beauty of your heart. :)god bless u
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Re: The Perfect Face?
« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2013, 10:53:36 AM »
Dear Madhoo ,

You are wonderful...as you look beneath the skin and your poem was really wonderful.

I shall post my poem beauty written more or less with same thought as yours .. May be you shall
feel that my poem is  an extention of yours , althugh I worte it around 25 years ago,

sanjay sehgal

Thanks Sanjay
I did read that poem of yours and of course two people can write on a similar topic :)
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Re: The Perfect Face?
« Reply #4 on: August 12, 2013, 11:00:11 AM »
Quote from: Rashmi
just awesome creation madhu ji, such a wonderfull thaught process u have got! no words---- ,no doubt this poetry shows beauty of your heart. :)god bless u

Thanks for reading Rashmi and understanding the depth of the poem.
I wrote this some time ago showing my love of the person who had lost his physical looks but to me he was as perfect as can be and his scarred face was not ugly at all.
God bless you too :)
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

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Re: The Perfect Face?
« Reply #5 on: August 13, 2013, 02:18:22 AM »
beautiful and perfect writting good going keep it up madhu
Ye Dunia Mujhe Jane Ya Na Jane,
Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.

ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Re: The Perfect Face?
« Reply #6 on: August 13, 2013, 07:49:23 AM »
beautiful and perfect writting good going keep it up madhu

Thanks for reading and showing appreciation Anil
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)