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anilrana

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Nadaan musafir
« on: August 08, 2013, 02:10:39 AM »


Nadaan musafir so ke hua kyon gumrah tu
Chor kar ber bhav pyar ke rah appena tu

Zindagi khoyi toe phir na kabhi tu usse payega
Hai yah anmol ratan jag mein ye sandesh jaga tu

Pyar kar apne desh se ye hamara hai Vatan
Desh ki seva kar ke kaleje ki aag ko bujha tu

Bhatka jab raah apni arjun krishna ne gyan jagaya
Ban ke Krishna khud ko updesh de kar jagaa tu

Adhram ke khilaaf lad kar guru ko maar giraya tha
Sacchayi ki raah par aisse hi Musafir badhe jaa tu

Aatank ko mitane ke khatir nayi socch bana kar
Prem ki bhavna se anil aaj ek nayi raah bana tu
Ye Dunia Mujhe Jane Ya Na Jane,
Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.

ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Re: Nadaan musafir
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2013, 07:56:44 AM »
Quote from: Anil
Zindagi khoyi toe phir na kabhi tu usse payega
Hai yah anmol ratan jag mein ye sandesh jaga tu

Awesome sher; actually the whole write is very meaningful: but not everyone will understand the depth of your feelings.
God bless you Anil. Keep writing.
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

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Re: Nadaan musafir
« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2013, 04:13:15 PM »
wah....bahut hi sunder rachna......

ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Re: Nadaan musafir
« Reply #3 on: August 14, 2013, 08:28:41 AM »
Quote from: Fikr
kyun ni samjehga koe... aise kaise.... huh

Thank God you understood.. but after reading for the umpteenth time   ;D as there were so many reads but no reply  :-\
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

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Re: Nadaan musafir
« Reply #4 on: August 14, 2013, 11:07:05 AM »


Nadaan musafir so ke hua kyon gumrah tu
Chor kar ber bhav pyar ke rah appena tu

Zindagi khoyi toe phir na kabhi tu usse payega
Hai yah anmol ratan jag mein ye sandesh jaga tu

Pyar kar apne desh se ye hamara hai Vatan
Desh ki seva kar ke kaleje ki aag ko bujha tu

Bhatka jab raah apni arjun krishna ne gyan jagaya
Ban ke Krishna khud ko updesh de kar jagaa tu

Adhram ke khilaaf lad kar guru ko maar giraya tha
Sacchayi ki raah par aisse hi Musafir badhe jaa tu

Aatank ko mitane ke khatir nayi socch bana kar
Prem ki bhavna se anil aaj ek nayi raah bana tu

desh bhati or prem sadbhaawana ka sandesh deti aapki ye rachana  ne khoob message chhoRaa hai anil ji ----god bless u ji khush rahiye :)
Rashmi Sharma

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anilrana

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Re: Nadaan musafir
« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2013, 02:58:05 AM »
aap sabhi ka dhnayawad kareta hoon jo meri kalam ko para or passend kiya
Ye Dunia Mujhe Jane Ya Na Jane,
Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.

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Re: Nadaan musafir
« Reply #6 on: August 18, 2013, 12:22:54 PM »
aapki baat mujh tak pahuNch gayi, bahut hi ahche tareeke se aapne apni baat ko saamne rakha hai, bas yuNhi likhte rahiye...

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Re: Nadaan musafir
« Reply #7 on: August 19, 2013, 07:33:23 AM »
aapki baat mujh tak pahuNch gayi, bahut hi ahche tareeke se aapne apni baat ko saamne rakha hai, bas yuNhi likhte rahiye...
bahoot bahoot shukeriya na cheez ke khayal or jazbaat aap samenj sakai or passend kiyai
Ye Dunia Mujhe Jane Ya Na Jane,
Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.

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Re: Nadaan musafir
« Reply #8 on: May 30, 2014, 10:39:28 AM »
Pyar kar apne desh se ye hamara hai Vatan
Desh ki seva kar ke kaleje ki aag ko bujha tu
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Re: Nadaan musafir
« Reply #9 on: December 22, 2014, 01:18:30 PM »
shukeriya reeta ji passend karenai ke liyai
Ye Dunia Mujhe Jane Ya Na Jane,
Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.