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AahnaA

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Unwaan
« on: August 05, 2013, 07:06:34 AM »
Hello Hindvi Vaasiyon


 yahan aapko ek theme di jayegi ek word jisse aapko sher kehna hai

wo shabd aapke sher ke misre me hona chahiye

chaahe oola me (first line ) ya saani (second line ) me

aap apna khudka sher ya kisi bhi shayar ka sher keh sakte hain

par plz unka naam zaroor mention karen...

har hafte hum ek naya shabd ya unwaan denge aur pure hafte us unwaan par aap sher keh sakte hain ya share kar sakte hai ..
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is hafte ka unwaan hai

DOSTI / DOST

AahnaA

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2013, 07:08:05 AM »
tum takalluf ko bhii iKhlaas samajhate ho "Faraz"
dost hotaa nahiiN har haath milaane waalaa


[Ahmed Faraz]

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #2 on: August 05, 2013, 07:24:35 AM »
doshti anmol hai ye jaan lijiye
toD ke rishta n meri jaan lijiye
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
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Taish

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2013, 08:07:18 AM »
mere taste ke hisaab se shayri ke liye bahut ahcha word nahiN hai ye... :p still lets see kuch khayal aaya to kaheNge jaroor...

AahnaA

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #4 on: August 05, 2013, 08:08:38 AM »
mere taste ke hisaab se shayri ke liye bahut ahcha word nahiN hai ye... :p still lets see kuch khayal aaya to kaheNge jaroor...

hmmmm......

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #5 on: August 05, 2013, 08:50:21 AM »
dostoN ki dosti ko aaj bhi salam hai
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kah gaye hon aakhirii mujh ko salaam wo bhale
Rashmi Sharma

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haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #6 on: August 05, 2013, 10:48:24 AM »
Tum jaisa dost kabhi kisi ko na mile
Ansoon jyada, hansi kam dete ho tum
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #7 on: August 05, 2013, 12:03:12 PM »
doston  ki dosti aazmaai jab to  ye paaya
dushmano ki dushmani me zyada jaan thi

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #8 on: August 07, 2013, 04:38:31 AM »
Khudaa jab dost hai ai "Daag" kyaa dushman se andeshaa
hamaaraa kuchh kisii kii dushmanii se ho nahiiN sakataa


Daag Dehlvi

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #9 on: August 07, 2013, 06:06:00 AM »
dost ban ban ke mile mujh ko miTaanewaale
maiN ne dekhe haiN ka_ii raNg badalanewaale

Saeed Rahi

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #10 on: August 07, 2013, 11:41:48 AM »
MohabbatoN meiN dikhaave ki dosti na mila
Agar gale nahi milta to haath bhi na mila -----------bashir badar
Rashmi Sharma

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #11 on: August 07, 2013, 04:46:09 PM »
aazmaaya hai dostoN ko jab,
dushmanoN se mohabbat hui...

--Taish

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #12 on: August 07, 2013, 05:15:18 PM »
Dosti Dil Hai Dimag Nahi Hai
Dosti Soch hai Aawaz Nahi Hai
Dekha Nahi Jata Dosti Ke Jazbe Ko
Ye Aik Ehsaas Hai Andaaz Nahi Hai   nm
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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #13 on: August 11, 2013, 02:43:50 PM »
dosto bikhar gaye kahaN ho tum

dosti pukaarti     chale aao
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: Unwaan
« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2013, 06:33:32 PM »
tumne pukara aur hum chale aye
dosti ka naya rang chadha laye