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ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Please make it stop
« on: August 04, 2013, 08:45:08 AM »
It was a day I can never forget
that made my life a living terror
I was all happy and smiles one moment
And next I was cowering with fear

I lay peacefully in my bed
Smiling contentedly with the days happenings
As I waited for sleep to overcome
And carry me to the dreamland until morning

It was some time later that I was rudely awakened
By cruel hands that bit into my flesh
My mind went blank as I held onto my hair
Wondering why my dream had become a nightmare

I heard screams of my loving mother
As she was pulled by a masked stranger
I saw my dad lying nearby
Quiet and beaten with red paint all over

I fainted then and woke up in a hospital
Only to relive the day again and again
How can I erase those painful memories
That makes me cower and cringe in pain

How can anyone live a useful life
While carrying grief and pain so deep
I pray to the Lord to send me my parents
So that every night I can be rocked to sleep


 
*Madhoo*
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

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Re: Please make it stop
« Reply #1 on: August 04, 2013, 09:30:41 AM »
Dear Madhoo ,

It was very touching and emotionally stirring....

God bless you.

Sanjay sehgal

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Re: Please make it stop
« Reply #2 on: August 04, 2013, 09:48:44 AM »
It was a day I can never forget
that made my life a living terror
I was all happy and smiles one moment
And next I was cowering with fear

I lay peacefully in my bed
Smiling contentedly with the days happenings
As I waited for sleep to overcome
And carry me to the dreamland until morning

It was some time later that I was rudely awakened
By cruel hands that bit into my flesh
My mind went blank as I held onto my hair
Wondering why my dream had become a nightmare

I heard screams of my loving mother
As she was pulled by a masked stranger
I saw my dad lying nearby
Quiet and beaten with red paint all over

I fainted then and woke up in a hospital
Only to relive the day again and again
How can I erase those painful memories
That makes me cower and cringe in pain

How can anyone live a useful life
While carrying grief and pain so deep
I pray to the Lord to send me my parents
So that every night I can be rocked to sleep


 
*Madhoo*
realy touching! the pain described by u i felt deep in my heart .
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Re: Please make it stop
« Reply #3 on: August 04, 2013, 10:56:42 AM »
Thank you for reading and understanding the pain.
Your words of encouragement are much appreciated Sanjay and Rashmi.
Bless you both
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)

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Re: Please make it stop
« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2013, 02:56:45 PM »
nice written and beatiful expression good going keep it up  jai hind jai bharat eash se jayada u know bina drink i dont know hinglish :p
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Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.

ॐAngel Madhooॐ

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Re: Please make it stop
« Reply #5 on: August 11, 2013, 11:33:05 AM »
Then how come you know it is nicely written and beautifully expressed, mr Rana Hinglish wala? :D
There is only ONE person you can trust: YOURSELF !! :)
♥ A M ♥
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Mein nahin hoon apne wajood mein, mujhe janey kis ney chura liya...
Mere sath rehta hai ek shakhs, koi jadoo usne chala diya... :)