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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #15 on: August 12, 2013, 12:57:57 PM »
dukh di pooni,
uthhe katti
jithhe kiran,
na jaaye kadaahiN

LOONA
sun sakhiye,
ni bhainaN Eere
bharam da pinDa kinjh koi cheere?
rukkh hovan,
taaN aari cheere
bharam kehaRi farnaahi cheere
bharamaaN wale,
kaale kachch Nu
cheer na sakan,
suche heere
bharam taaN saade dharmaaN jaaye,
jinna ne saade
koole pairiiN
sharmaaN wale sangal paaye
jo na saathoN jaan tuRaaye
maryaada de
killiN bajjhi
DhoRaaN vaakan rooh kurlaaye
par naa kille jaan puTaaye
te eh nisafal,
jatan asaada
saadi hi kismat kahlaaye
haare-TuTe asiN vichaare
apni apni sooli chukki
firde aawagaun banaaye
sawarag narak de
Dhaung rachaaye
Dhilla moonh kar kah chhaD.de haan
har koi apni kismat khaaye

EERA
par loona!
kujh kismat bhi hai
bhaweiN samey de kachche raah te
umar de ikk pinjey jehe rath di
kujh ghaRiyaN lai,
ukkari leeh hai
aakhir is vich bharam bhi keeh hai?

LOONA
je koi kismat vergi shai hai
taaN oh karam-dhuni di lai hai
karam kamavan di hi jai hai

MATHRI
par loona!
kujh samajh naa aaiya
kyoN tere,
diL te aa baiTha
dukh da mahaN kulachhana saaiya
tu taaN raam-ratan var paaiya
bhit-aNgiye
tainu bhauN to chukk ke
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #16 on: August 12, 2013, 01:27:39 PM »

us taaN uchche takhat bahaaiya
raRi raaviye,
bol na manda
jis tainu ganga-jali banaaiya
amb vaDhaa koii,
kad thoharaaN nu vaaRaaN karda?
thohraaN da phull,
kade kise na mandir chaRda
kad koii sooraj,
deeve di parkarmaa karda?
mauhare khaatir,
kad koi aRiye
saah nu hardaa
nirdhan de taaN chhore toN
rabb bhi hai dardaa
tuN vaDD-bhaagi,
tera taa
ikk shaah hai barda

LOONA
mainu bhit-angi nu
bhit-angaa var devo
moR lavo eh phull
tali soolaaN dhar devo
khoh lao mahal-chubaare
te jhikka ghar devo
jis kandhi di itt maiN
othe hi jaR devo
mainu bhit-angi nu
bhit-angaa var devo
be-shakk chambaa, chambaa
par kumlaaiya mandaa
mahak-nakhutte chambe toN
van-geNdaa chaNgaa
binaaN haan,
jisamaaN da paani
bane naa gangaa
adh-aNge to chaNgaa ni
mainu bhit-aNga
mainu bhit-angi nu
bhit-angaa var devo
adh-aNge di, raani toN
maiN bhali chamaari
bujhe hawan kuNd toN
chulle bhari aNgaari
chann chauth de koloN
chaNgi raat-aNdhaari
haan nu kehNde haan
agg nu agg pyaari
mainu bhit-angi nu
bhit-angaa var devo
ni maiN agg niri,
te agg tali dhar devo

MATHARI
par saiyeiN
tooN eh naa ukki gall vichaari
behi bhali kathoori,
tazaa hiNg hai maaRi
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #17 on: August 13, 2013, 11:34:17 AM »
LOONA
hiNg sada bal
kathoori pal vich maare
palaN chhinaaN vich usdi
saari mehak ujaaRe
hiNg nu  koi kathoori
keekan bolli maare

MATHARI
maiN saiyeiN
bolli naa maari
maiN taaN teri sai-aNgan haaN
agg di peeR,
pachhanan haari

LOONA
saiyeiN ni,
sun meriye saiyeiN
agg di peeR
pachhaane kehRa?
agg de dukh nu jaane kehRa?
saiyeiN jad bhi
agg jammadi hai
agg di ambaRi ro paindi hai
har ambaRi di,
kukh vich saiyeiN
puttar di khushbo rehndi hai
agg jamme,
taaN dudh sukk jaaNda
vich kaleje khoh paindi hai
baabal di,
pagg daa raNg khurda
kanni maNdi soa paiNdi hai
janam-dihaaRe,
boohioN kaDhan
di bas chiNta ho jaandi hai
agg di peeR pachhaane kehRa
agg nu peeR,
sada rehndi hai
koi na aisi naar dharat te
jo ke peeR-vichhunni hove
seekheiN vaang kabaabaaB laa ke
jo na mardaaN
bhunni hove
kise desh vich naar naa aisi
jo naa haqq to,
runni hove
koi naa naar,
jo es jahaane
vaaNg kabar naa sunni hove
je koi hai,
taa maiN kehndi haaN
ajj oh mere saahveiN aave
sane saNdhoori maang meri de
meri umara,
bhi lai jaave

MATHARI

jeekan deeva,
divioN balda
saiyeiN!
umaroN umara baldi
har naari hi rachanhaar hai
rachan-haar nu,
maut naa chhaldi
rachan-haar jo vi rachda hai
us choN aapni,
umar saNjhaane
divas, saal te sadiyaaN vaale
oh taa puThe gheR naa jaane
apni rachana de piNDe choN
aapne saah di,
mehak pachhaane
rachan-haar,
marnaa naa jaane

LOONA
saiyoN!
naari keeh rachadi hai
agan-vares jadoN machadi hai
vaang falaaN de,
aa rasdi hai
jhooThi daar muhabbat vaali
us da piNDa
aa pachhdi hai
chaheyaaN, an chaheyaaN dharti te
haDD maas da,
butt rachadi hai
majboori taaN rachana naahiN
naari is te ,
khud hassadi hai



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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #18 on: August 13, 2013, 12:32:23 PM »
EERA
dharti te,
jo kujh suhana hai
us de pichhe naar avashsh hai
jo kujh kise
mahaan hai racheya
us vich naari daa hi hath hai
naari aape naraiyan hai
har matthe dii teezi akkh hai
naari,
dharti dii kavita hai
kull bhavikh naari de bas hai
par,jo
suhane to suhanaa hai
oh hai bas naari di chori
is chori bin
sabh kujh kojhaa
kallariN tel-pali jiuN rohRI
har agani nu
agg da taalaa
koi aadrash-supan laanda hai
par aadarsh-supan naa labhadaa
te taale nu
jaNg khaanda hai
agg da taala ,
aakhir saiyeiN
ikk din aape TuT janda hai
te aadarsh-heen koi supanaa
agani chori kar lainda hai
aapne chaunke
dabb lainda hai

LOONA
ni saiyoN, ni kooNjaRio
mainu aisa taalaa maaro
naa khulle naa bhajje bhaaweiN
lakkh hathoRaa maaro
daNd-khaNd daa bhano chooRaa
kauD kaleere saaRo
hukum karo mere baable
jaa raaje araz guzaaro
lai challo koT-siyaal nu
ikk agg di laash kuhaaro
     [loona uchchi-uchchi ron lagg jaaNdi hai,
       eera us nu chupp karaun di koshish kardi hai]

EERA
naa ro ni,
chambe diye jaaiye
guR hove ta vaND vi laiye
par dukkhaaN nu
kinj vaNDaaiye
asiN taaN sabbhe bhaTh jhokan nu
aRiye, agg di joon haNDaaiye
naa ro ni,
chambe diye jaaiye

MATHARI
ni eera!
ehnu rovan de tooN
daag dile de dhovan de tooN
hanjhu saaDe dukkh vaNDaaNde
is nu halki hovan de tu
 saiyeiN, es dharat de jeevaaN
di akkh jekar haNjh naa chove
taaN sambhav hai,
dukkhaaN laddi
saari dharti paagal hove
haNjhu saaDe,
so mittar jo
baRe pyaare te be-garze
saaDe dukkh di khaatir jehaRe
chupp chupeete,
ne Digg marde
kehaNde, haNjhu so vaTTe jo
pyaar nu tolan,
takaRi chaRde

sau yaaraaN di yaari naaloN,
ikk haNjhu di yaari chaNgi
pyaar di baazi
jittan naaloN
pyaar di baazi,
haari chaNgi
                    [loona da pita baaru kamare
                        'ch parvesh karda hai]

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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #19 on: August 14, 2013, 03:50:33 PM »
BAAROO
har dhee da dukh
janan maavaaN
baabal janan saar ki dheeye?
loki kehnde aaye,gurbat
nar-singha avtaar ni dheeye
naa eh saanu,
aNdar maare
te na baahar-baar ni dheeye
vich dahliijiiN,
sanghi ghutte
kaale hath pasaar ni dheeye
nirdhan de ghar
dhee da jammana
kismat nu hai
haar ni dheeye
uTh aa pahunche, morniye ni
dola ghatt kuhaar ni dheeye
baahar raja aap khaRa
te naal khaRe
aswaar ni dheeye
vaapas kot-syaale taaeeN
sabhe hoe tyaar ni dheeye
ikk nirdhan,
baabal da lai jaa
aNtam-vaar
pyaar ni dheeye
           [eera nu sambodhan karke]

BAAROO
eera puttar,
tu bhi kujh din
Tur ja loonaa naal ni dheeye
parchhaveiN vatt naal raviN
te poori kariN sambhaal ni dheeye
jad ehda man
varch jaae ta
muR aaweeN chambiyaal ni dheeye
mera te, naale baap tere da
eho ikk sawaal ni dheeye
ghalladi rahiN
kise hath saanu
is daa haal,
hawaal ni dheeye
    [sabhe ronde kamare 'choN nikalde
       han ikk vidayigi da geet kuRiyaN
           de mooNh te aa  jaaNda hai ]




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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #20 on: August 17, 2013, 01:00:35 PM »

CHAUTHA  ANK



Ajit,Baldeep te Aasha Bhaunsale de NaaN



kujja bhajje taaN suTTde khauliyaaN theeN
naar bhajje taaN muR jaaye maapiyaaN de



raani ichharaaN aapne mehal ,ch baiThi,
raja salwaan de dooje vyaah di khabar sun ke
 aapni golli naal rudan kar rahi hai


ICHHARAAN

kehRe desh ditti
dhee baabla ve
jithhe lokaaN nu dukhaaN di
saar koi na
jehRe desh ch chaNdre soorjaaN da
dhupp apni naal hi
pyaar koi naa
aadam khor jaNgal,
gore pinDyaaN de
daaliN patt Na phull ,falhaar koi na
pinDe vechane,
te pinDe mull laine
haDD maas to binaaN vapaar koi na
jehaRe desh naari,
bhoge narak-kumbhi
jutti pair di,
vadh satikaar koi naa

Goli
rakh hauNsla
raaniye sabar kar lai
rakheiN aas kyoN
marad di zaat koloN
marad zaat toN vafaa di aas karni
maNgani risham,
amaavas di raat koloN

ICHHARAAN
maiN na golliye,bholiye
vafaa mangaaN
maiN taa ikko hi maut pai,
maNgdi haaN
mache kaaljaa
jeebhe kuRall painde
karno gall kuchajji pai saNgdi haaN
mere saNgh 'choN
mera naa saah laNghe,
kaale paNdh,
namoshi de aNgadi haaN,
raaja hoye, chamaari parnaaye aandhi
faRh kaalja,
peeR paii thmmadi haaN

GOLLI

marad mushke,
jaa behande ni kaNjaraaN de
kalli kaari chamaari
di baat ki e
agg choop ke fok jaa suTT deNde
fer puchhade ji
teri, zaat ki e ?
jehaRi kiran nu
aNgg chhuha behaNde
us kiran di fer, aukaat ki e
lakh soorajaa,
us di bhare haami
fer ohda te marad daa
saath ki e
raatiN hor,
te dine nu hor huNde
karni girgaRaaN di bhalaa
baat ki e

ICHHARAAN
ni main girgiTaN de raNg
samajhadi haan
par eh mardaaN de raNg
naa samajh saki
DaNg samjhaaN maiN kaale khaRapiyaaN de
par eh mardaaN de DaNg
naa samajh saki ?
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #21 on: September 21, 2013, 04:54:48 PM »
GOLI
marad laRde
damoohi de vaang raani
jihnu laRan
eh sada hi laRi jaande
ehnaaN DangiyaaN, ate naa DangiyaaN vi
bhaag naari vichaari de,
saRi jaande
kai vaari,
maiN raaniye sochadi haaN

kihne lekh si likhe ni naariyaaN de
chandan kismataaN de,
hathiN cheerane nu
puThe dande
kaDhaaiye ni aariyaaN de
joon pinjare
marad de bhogane nu
khanbh nochiye.
aap udaariyaN de
naale putt deiye
naale patt deiye
naale daave bhi kariye ni yaariyaaN de
maal jitt-jita ke
moR deiye
ehnaa chandre soom jawaariyaaN de
daiye rangane nu
rang kaDh lainde
jaaiye ashake ni ehna
lalaariyaaN de
paTT katiye
te naal bhujj mariye
laanat suchiyaaN
tandaaN khalaariyaaN de

ehna mardaaN di zaat di
bhali poochhi
es jaat to raaniye
bhale kutte
behiyaaN khaaye ke raakhiyaaN karan jehRe
chhaDDan dar na
khaaye ke roz jutte
khaa jaan ni kooliyaN
lagar dehiyaaN
par eh marad
muhabbat de naam utte
sunghde firan
eh daraaN paraiyaaN utte
marad rahan paraaiyaN de sada bhukhe
ni eh oh kutte
jo na karan raakhi
sannu maarde
vafa de naam utte


dine hor de daraaN to
tukk khaande
raati hor de daraaN te
jaa sutte
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #22 on: September 23, 2013, 10:51:11 AM »
ICHHARAN

ni maiN golliye!
dhup pai araz kardi
mainu menDaRa sooraja moR devo
udhe-nagriyaN di dhee,
hath joRe
mere angaN choN agg nichoR devo
jaN ni umar di shakh te,
tehkadi da
mera full hayaati da
toR devo
ja ni gamaaN di
shookadi naiN andar
karo dakkare
te mainu roR devo
jiunde jee 
ni kant visaar dena

es desh di naar de vass naahiN
bujh jaaye sandoor je
maang vichoN
hunda kise vi naar toN
hass naahiN
es desh di kant kartaar saiye
lakh vail hove
hunda dass naahiN
hove vailly je marad
taa bakhsh deiye
kante manda na boliye
golliye ni
kant roop nu kahn kar jaaniye ji
augan marad de
kade na foliye ni
kade aapna
marad na bhandiye ni
patt aapni aap na roliye ni
mandar devate de
deeva baal aaiye
kade us da sila
na Toliye ni

GOLLI


eh taa nira hai
andh-vishvaash raani
akhaaN mund ke khuhe di mann bhauni
es taraaN
es desh di naar raani
lakhaaN janam na dukhaaN to
mukat honi
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #23 on: October 28, 2013, 10:52:04 AM »
ICHHARAN

Naari na hi
andhvishvas da hai
naari sada aniyaa choN janam laindi
naari naam,
ikk aise ehsaas da hai
jiweiN jakham ch
peeR hai ghuldi rehndi

GOLLI


jekar raaniye.
eho vishvaas tera
ta tu aiweiN.
salwaan nu ro naahiN
ikk chhadd, parnaaye oh lakh loona
aiweiN naina ch hanjh pro naahiN

ICHHARAA

Eh na golliye ni,
vishvaas mera
ikk naar karoopi par keeh aakhe
jehaRi naar na kant
rijha saki
ni oh dosh kise sir
keeh thaape

je kar rakhwaaN
panchhi vi udd jaawe
taa vi golliye dadhaRa dukh hunda
paaye kant vichhoRa
je naar taaiN
ohda deen imaan hi
lutt hunda
na ta us bechaari to
baiTh hove
na ta us bechaari to uTh hunda
dehi nain-praan,
naa rehan maasa
lahu maas da,
sakhana butt hunda
na ta kise de naal hi
bol hove
na ta kise de naal hi
russ hunda

mere dil da haal,
ajj ikanaa hai
biyaabaan jiyuN ikk ujaaR hove
hove seekhar dupahar
te loo bagdi
taanbe-rang mahinaRa
haaR hove
door door koi na rukh hove
taaviN taaviN koi
thohraaN di vaaR hove
us vich ujaaR hoe
maRi baldi
sir te uddadi
girjhaaN di daar hove
hoe hawa vagdi naal hichkiyaaN de
ikk chup aawaajaN,
rahi maar hove

iuN jaape,
jiuN dain koi kare pichha
jekar ratta vi kite
khatkaar hove
ikk dar lagge
aawe jhujhuni jehi
dooji cheekh,
kalejioN paar hove

ni koi kahe salwaan nu
jaa aRio
mainu sunn ujaaRaaN ne khaa jaana
maindi chandri rooh vich
ron kutte
mera soorja mukh
kumlaa jaana
mainu apne chhaurioN dar lagda
mainu meriyaaN chhauriyaaN
kha jaana
kehna, poorn de naa da vaasta je
ikk vaar aa mukh
dikha jaana
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #24 on: October 29, 2013, 10:35:28 AM »
GOLLI

JehRa divas aauna
vich kabar raani
oh baahar ta kade na avea e
raai ghate,
na vadhe hi til maasa
dhuroN mathe jo lekh likhaviya e

asaaN naariyaaN,
mardaaN de par fad-fad
peeraN-maariaaN ,
maan gavaaea e
chann sarwariN tairda shail bhaaveiN
vich vehniyaaN
kade na bhaaviya e
ikk araz gujaaraaN
maiN naariyaN nu
jado us to marad khushbu mange
naari mang lae
us di milkh saari
us chhinn na,
us di jeebh sange

kadhe lilliyaaN ,dawe oh lakh jhaansa
odon teek na naar
khushbo vande,
jado teek ni marad na hukum manne
sir bhaar na hoke
dariN vanjhe
par tu raaniye
jhall khaler naahi
kahde lai tu hanjhu pai roRdi eiN?
ikk daint nu devta
samajh kaahnu
gore hath namaaniye joRdi eiN?
jo na maas to vadh,
swaad jaane
khuni shikra pai ghare nu moRdi eiN
hae ni naariye,
maindRe watan diye
jhooThe marad lai,
jaan kiyuN toRdi eiN?
vekh andh-vishvaas
eh naariyaaN da
kade roh aaunda
kade moh aaunda
ikk chhin chaahwaN ehdi karaaN pooja
dooja nafartaa de sar,
chhoh aaunda

eh marad kasaai vatt dunbiaaN jo
be-jibhiyaaN naariyaaN koh aaunda
roop dhaar parmeshwar da
kinjh khaure
allaR supan ni
naar de chhoh aaunda?

ICHHARAN

sarmaa kutti si
indar de daraN utte
asiN mardaN de daraN te kuttia haaN
tukkar dang da
kha asis daiye
chhaweiN kandhaN de dhuraN to suttiyaN haaN
kujh mech
te kujh na mech aaiyaaN
asiN mardaN de pairaN ch
juttiyaN haaN

je maiN baanjh hundi
taa na dukh hunda
ohde vehRe maiN chananaa rohReya ni
chann hundiya
chaTh viaah aandi
meri peeR da mull na moRiya ni
ikk putt bhore
dooja pati khussa
mathaa chhad mukadar iuN dauRiya ni
ni maiN kit vanjhaaN
te main kit jaawaaN
mainu koi vi
raah naa ahuRiya ni
pooran chhadd bhore
muRaaN pekiyaaN nu
eh bhi golliye baat naa Theek jaape
dheeaaN
maan ki karan ni pichhaliyaaN te
dheeaN kadoN ne khaRde,
ni moR maape?
jekar maapiyaaN de ghar,
muRan dheeaaN
vajje dhol namoshi da kull paase
ni maiN daraaN,
ke Daadhi kuchajaRi maiN
khaure jagg vallali nu
keeh aakhe?
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #25 on: November 19, 2013, 11:36:32 AM »
GOLI

marad mangde
raaniye pindiyaaN nu
koi vi marad na kade santaan mange
kaam-dev da putt
har marad zahiri
es lai naa naar nu kade dange
oh taa dange,
ke antar di bhatkana de,
laambu machade ratta ho jaan Thandhe
ikk vish zarili
hai vaasna di
jehDi marad ni
naar nu roz vande

es vish da fal,
santaan raani
naari vish hai garabh vich lai firdi
ikk zehni aayaashi,
manukh di nu
naari kukh di peeD hai kahi firdi
aiweiN mamta
de nashe 'ch choor ho ke
naari sat aasmaana 'ch pai firdi
naari marad de
kojh te kooD nu bhi
aiweiN wafa da naam hai dai firdi

vafa naam na raaniye
vasana da
vafa naam hai fulla 'ch mehak da ni
jiweiN dhupp 'ch
motiya rang ghuliya
saagar jikanaa chann nu sehkada ni
chann samajh,
chakor jiuN agg utte
khanbh saaDne taai aa baiTh da ni
par ni giTha thi,
naar nu marad min ke
jhooTha vaangh kasumbhaDe tehkada ni

kujja bhajje
taa suttade kholiyaaN thii
naar bhajje, taa muD jaaye mapiyaa de
jagg hass painda
jamman waliyaaN te
dukh mannan paraaye kiyun haasiyaaN de
kade mangiyaaN
maut naa aa jaandi
kuDE raaniye girjjha de aakhiyaa te
jamman waale
te doosara rabb sachha
mittar do hi
dilaN de paatiyaa de
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #26 on: November 20, 2013, 11:32:36 AM »
ICHHARAN

russe yaar,
taa golliye mann jaande
russi naar na koi manaa sakda
agg laggi
jiyuN baans de janglaaN nu
kinna vare, naa megh bujha sakdaa
russi naar,
te jugg hoye ikk paase
koi na us nu fer haraa sakda
aThaaN koonta de diggaj,
vi aaun bhaaweiN
ohda pair na koi
hila sakda
par maiN russaN
ta golliye kiweiN russaN
kihde aasre pooran nu chhadd jaawaN?
tadoN teek
ki muDaN maiN pekiyaa nu
puttar bhoriyoN je naa kadh jaawaaN?
'ThaaraaN vareh de sehkadi,
ajj keekan
rukh aaiya bahaar 'te vadh jaawaaN ?
je na maa hovaaN
tikki uggade nu
chhadd mulakh salwaan da,
lad jaawaaN

naari,
pati da hizar ta sah jaandi
par putt da hizar na sah sakke
jhinjhan vel be-jaDi vatt
naar jeeve,
par patiyaaN baanjh naa rah sakke
binaa putt
iyuN naar mazboor hove
jiweiN paani te leek na bah sakke
jiweriN vidhava nu
kise theeN ishaq hove
par oh kise nu
kade naa kah sakke
sakk shaukana hundiyaN
kikkaraaN de
moiyaaN khallaN vi jo rang laindiyaaN ni
behe marad nu
muskaDi naal maaran
aqal dashrathhaaN di dang khaandiyaaN ni
raam kise da,
vanaa nu tor devan
bharat uchade taqht baiThaandiyaaN ni
sachh suii de nakiyoN
oonTh langhe
jhooTh shaunkanaa sakk kamaandiyaaN ni

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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #27 on: June 17, 2014, 11:28:11 AM »
jadoN putt di goliye,
yaad aawe
meri aandri sarkaDa raDkada ni
dhukhe kaalja,
jigar ch sall painde
dil vaang mirdang de dhaDkada ni
maTha paatda,jusse ch pain chingaN
bhanbaD dhunni de laag jehe bhaDkada ni
bull sukkade,
jeebh kumla jaandi
saah sangh de vich hi atakda ni

ni maiN daraaN,
ke loona na loon bhanne
ni koi hor na chann chaDa jaawe
pahlaN kha gai,
sire da saaiN mera
mera putt bhi kidhre naa khaa jaawe
toone haarna,
ehna pahaDana de
roop vekh na koi nashiya jaawe
lakhaaN janam thi us di ,
rooh bhatke
jehDa ehna nu ang chhuha jaawe
toone, jaDiyaN,
te dhaage tabeet kehnde
pahlon jammano ehna nu aa jaawe
murda kadh ke,
kabar choN bhog kar laye
je koi marad ni naar nu bhaa jaawe
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #28 on: June 17, 2014, 11:49:13 AM »
maiN sa sochdi,
pooran da bhorioN hi
bus nikalde kaaj racha desaN
mathe chitar ke,
aap maiN dholkaN de
shagun bheN ke gaun baiTha desaN
vanduN bhajjiyaN,
mehndi ch hath rangooN
vatne milkh di gall te laa desaN
hoor marmari,
labh balour vargi
puttar poorane de laD laa desaN

rahi dilaN di,
dil vich gall saari
chaa mare kuaare hi goliye ni
jehDe vehDe,
kalesh ni aan vaDda
us vehDe cho khushi na toliye ni
kehnde,
gharaN ch bhoot-pret vassan
bol kandh to uchi jo boliye ni
ghar hoe kalesh,
ta theh theeve
ratt ullu di daraaN to dohliye ni

jeewe loona,
te jeewe salwaan usda
dhale soorjaN dhup to ki laina?
thoDi langh gai,
thoDi hai langh jaani
assaN khich dhrooh ke jee laina
mukhoN,
kade salwaan nu aakhna nahi
asiN jeebh nu hoThaN ch see laiNa
paase maarde,
umar di raat langhu
miTha zahir,
judaai da pee laina
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #29 on: June 19, 2014, 05:33:41 PM »
GOLI                                 jeeweiN shahniyeiN
meriye raaniye ni
MaithoN tendaDa dukh na vekh hunda
Khadha loon
Main teriyaN chhanniyaN da
Rudan vekh ni kaalje chhek hunda
Laggi agg
Naseebe nu vekh tere
MaithoN sah na chandra sake
Roop ron
Te karam ne vah khaande
Saara kudartaaN de hath bhed hundai
Ikk araz kardi
Je naa bura manno
Chaar dina lai parat jaao maapiyaN
Paun-paani vi badliyaN
Jind mehke
Paani bhale par pekiyaN paasiyaN de
Paasa partiyaN
Rogi da rog ghatda
Dukh vadhan akaliyaB baiThiyaN de
Ganga jaye ke
BhaweiN na paap dhulde
Kujh vaham par ruDan
Ni nahtiyaN de

 


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