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LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« on: June 24, 2013, 10:00:21 AM »
chanani raat de antim pahar nati te sootardhaar ikk sanghane jangal vichh baithe prem kar rahe han

NATI:-eh kawan su desh  suhavada
te kawan su eh dariya
jo raat nameghi chann di
vichh dooroN dalak reha

kai vingh valeme maarda
koi agg da sapp jeha
jo kadh dusaanghi jeebh nu
vaadi vichh shook reha

SOOTARDHAAR:-

eh desh su chamba sohniye
eh raavi su dariya
jo airavati kehaamdi
vichh dev lok de jaa

eh dhee hai paanghi rishi di
ehda chandarbhag bharaa
chambiyaali raani de vali
ehnu mahange mull liya

te ta hi dhee toN badal ke
ehda putar naam piya
chambiyaali khatir jamda
ehnu chamba desh keha

NATI:- hai itaraN bhijji bag rahi
thhandi te seet hawa
ethe raat raani da jaapda
jiun saah hai dull giya

SOOTARDHAAR:- haaN ni jinde meriye
tu bilkul theek keha
hai kung , kathuri,agar da
jiun vage piya dariya

ikk mansarovar itar da
vichh chann da hans jeha
hai chupp chupita tairda
te taare chuge piya

NATI:- par mainu ikan japda
jiun chaanan de dariya
eh mahak jiwein ikk kuDi chiDi
jihda sajjan door giya

agan varese vatna mal mal
rahi jo nagan naha
paani pa pa agg bhujhaawe
agg na bujhan aa

SOOTARDHAAR:- wah! eh tu khoob keha
sachmuch tan di agg nu
na paani sake bujha
hai sambhav tan di agg thiN
khoul samundar ja

NATI:-chheD surangi paun di
rahi rutt virhaDe gaa
jiun kaami sajjan kise da
jad jaye vichhoDa paa

ikk doongi souli shaam nu
kite vichh ujaadiN jaa
jiun thidhiN mukhiaaN maardi
koi birhan paye kurlaa

SOOTARDHAAR:- eh keha suhava desh hai
te kehi nashilii vaa
iyun tarwar jaapan jhoomde
jiyun chheemba dung giya

hai thaN thaN kesu mouliya
te dulliya lahu jeha
jiyun kaale rade pahaaD da
seena paat giya

iiun jaape bhoN diyaN bulliyaN
vichh bhariya nashaa jeha
ikk swaad swaad ho jina nu
hai ambar chumm reha

koi jikan premi prem to
ikk umraN banjh reha
us ambhe honth ta chumanaa
par bhukha fer reha

NATI:-suno swaami keha suhawa
panchhi bol reha
jiun kise premi aapne
premi da naam liya

jiun bans di paati por choN
ikk rumka lngh gya
jiun sej sajjan di manadi
da haasa nikkal giya

pratham prem de pratham mel de
pratham hi shabad jeha
dard paruche kise geet de
antam bol jeha


SOOTARDHAAR:-hai soule jehe pahaad te
chann ikan sobh reha
jiun kulik naag koi mani thiN
nere vich khed reha

eh parwat lum-salamda
hai ikkan fail giya
jiun naagaN di maaN soorsa
di hove saal-girha

kai bashak,urag te chimbade
kai ahi,khadape aa
kai kallari,uddane,padam te
sangchoode dhoun uthha

paye chanan da dudh piwande
te rahe ne jashan mana
oh vekh! ni jinde ghaatiaN
vichh baddal udd reha

jiun sapp kise nu dang ke
gusse vichh ulat giya
supan-lok de uddade hoe
dudha mahal jeha

jihdi mamti baitha chann da
koi panchhi bol reha
vich full-pattiaN di sej te
ikk nanga agan jeha

ikk butt gulaabi naar da
koi kaam vekh reha
te bhogan pahle us da
jiun sapna tut giya

NATI:-main vekh ke uchiyaN tissiyaN
haN rahi tasveer bana
jiun van-devi arnainy
baddalaN di sej vichha

van-puttar taaiN jikanaaN
rahi hove dudh chungha
dudh bhariyaN souliaaN chhaatiyaN
te kosi neejh laga

jiun dudh piyaundi baal nu
her maaN jaawe nashiyaa

SOOTARDHAAR:- par haye ne dharat suhaviye
tu laye kih lekh likhaa
tera har din hi mar jaawanda
lai kirnaN da faah

teri her rutt hai chhinn-bhangari
jo jamme so mar ja
ethe chhinn to chinn na farhida
na saah kolo hi saah

jo saah hai buttoN tutada
uhdi kot janam na thhaah
jiun gagni uddde panchhiyaan
di paid fadi na jaa

tera her full hi mar jaawanda
mehkaN di june handhaa
tera her diunh sootak-rutt di
peedh ch lainda saah

tera her saah pehlaaN jammno
lainda audh handhaa
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #1 on: June 24, 2013, 10:25:13 AM »

NATI:-suno taN mere ram jeeo
lekhaan nu dosh keha
hai changa je naN faDida
ethhe saah koloN je saah

kii bura je manzil pahlaDE
te pichhoN labhe raah?
jaN teer lagan toN pehlaDE
je chhatti lagge ghaah

fir adhvaate hi khaDan da
aawe baDa maza
kujh pichhe muDan di lalsa
kujh agge vadhan da chaa

par jo bhi pooran thivia
ohda jeena jagg kiha?
hai shukar samaN na dharat te
ikko thhaun khaDa

SOOTARDHAAR:-eh taN maiN bhi samjhada
par hundai dukh baDa
jad kalle bah ke sochiye
eh phull jaane kumla

eh vaadi de vich shookada
sukk jaana dariya
ehne bhalke rukh badalna
jo vagdi seet hawa

han ruttaN pattar chhandane
lai jaane poun uDa
lai jaane rukh vadhaaye ke
tarkhaanaN mochhe paa

tarkhaanaN mochhe paaye ke
laine palangh bana
palange sejaN maanade
marne sej vichha

NATI:-
marna jeena karam hai
is da khed keha
hai pariwartan hi aatma
jihnu jaanda amar keha

is de baajhoN sahaj si
buss jaandi eh vaa
buss jaande chann soorje
buss jande dariya

butt nuN butt gal milan da
rehnda ratta na chaa
baaggiN full naN moulade
dhakkiN saawe gha

is amar manukh di bhatkana
vich dadha tej nasha
is bhatkan da naN zindgi
te is da naam kaza

eh bhatkan da hi roop hai
jo khet rahe lehra
is bhatkan di hi kukh choN
hai dharti janam liya

SOOTARDHAAR:-uff kehi eh bhatkana
kujh supane modhe cha
janam-divas di nagan-ghaDi toN
than nuN munh vich pa

hirnaN singi baith ke
deni umar vanjha
Nati:- eh bhatkan sada manukh nu
agge rahi chalaa

is bhatkan agge devate
bhi jaande sees nibha

SOOTARDHAAR:-hai sankh ne vajje mandriN
te khoohiN dol piya
hann sathiiN chidiyaN chookiyaN
te jungle bol piya

hai hoiya sarghi velaDa
te chann bhi bujh giya
hai sooraj da rath hikkda
surbhi aaye piya

aao mudiye dev-lok nu
gai saari raat viha
NATI:- ki hoiya sajjan maindaDe
je gai hai raat viha

ki hoiya mere shaam jio
je khoohiN dol piya
ji chahunda ese dharat te
maiN dewaN umar vanjha

SOOTARDHAAR:- hai kaun ne toone haariyaN
jihnaN keeli kul fiza
jiuN gumbad vich aavaaj di
turdi rahe sadaa

jiuN madhu-makhiyaN da
madhu-vanaN vich tola udd reha
jiuN cheer ke jungle baaNs de
langhe tej hawa

jiuN thal  choN langhe kaafla
jad adhi raat viha
hai saari vaadi goonj pai
eh kaun ne rahiyaN gaa

adhi raatiN desh chambe de
chamba khiDiya ho
chamba khiDiya maalne
ohde mehliN gai khushbo

mehliN raani jaagdi
ohde nainiN neend na ko
raaje taaiN aakhadi
main chamba laina sou

jo kaale van mouliya
jihdi houke jehi khushbu
dharmi  raja aakhda
baahaN vich paro

na ro jinde meriye
lagg lain de loa
chambey khaatir sohniye
jaasaN kaale koh

raani chambe sehkadi
mari vichaari ho
jekar raaja dabbda
maili jaandi ho

jekar raaja saDada
kaali jaandi ho
adhiN raatiN desh chambe de
chambe khiDiya ho

SOOTARDHAAR:-vekh nate!
kinj vaadi de vich
swar hai goonj reha
saraswati de swar-mandal nu
jiuN koi chheD giya

kattak maaNh vich koonjaN da
jiuN kanniN bol piya
chetar de vich jiuN kar baagiN
vage poore di vaa

saun mahine jiuN koiyalaN di
dooroN aaye sadaa
nikki kani da kehnde chhanne
meeNh jiuN vareH piya

jiuN parwat vich parwati da
bichhuaa chhanak reha
jaaN jiuN hove goonjda
shiv da naad-mahan

NATI:-jiuN sagar di chaati te
koi reha machhera ga
jaN birhan de vich kalje
shabad koi dhukhe piya

jo ohde jhutthe premi us de
kanni kade keha


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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #2 on: June 25, 2013, 08:44:20 AM »
SOOTARDHAAR:-
eh aanand keha?
kinjh shabad di mehak faDaN
maithoN mehak faDi naa jaa
jiuN koi bhaura gun-gun karda
kanwar-saroawar jaa

mahak de kajhan lipte hoe
 neele  supan jeha
jiweiN kise vidhva hauka bhariya
sunni sej vichha

 NATI:-
eh ta han chambiyalna
jo rahiyaaN ral-mil gaa
shahad-parooche kanTh choN
lammi heq laga

jiyon maaN koi gaawe birhaDa
charkhe tand valaa
jihda puttar satt-smundriN
na muDiya laam giya

SOOTARDHAAR
eh ta sabho raaniyaaN
han rahiyaN itt vall aa
hath fullaN diyaN daaliyaN
sir te gaDve chaa

aa gagnaN nu uddiye
jaaN chaD deiye raah
 baniye vaasi dhart de
jaaN laiye roop vata

NATI:-
haN haN prabhu ji Theek keha
aao laiye roop vata
te kariye chaar galoDiyaN
naal ehna de jaa

(sootardhar te nati roop vataa lainde han 
chambiyalna uchi uchi gaundiyaN parwesh
kardiyaN han nati uhna choN ikk naal gallaN
kardi hai)


NATI:-
chambe diye chambeliye
teri jeeve mehak sada
eh jowan da haD Thiliya
kis pattaN nu jaa

hass, havelaN bugtiyaN
gal vich kanThe paa
chhaapaN chhalle,aarsiyaN
gore hath aDa

chichi vich kalichaDi
pairi sagle paa
koh koh aal gundaaye ke
full te chonk saja

kanni jhumke jhoolde
laung tilliyaN paa
sir sobhan fulkaariyaN
atlas patt handha
kit vall chaliiyaN koonjaDiyaN
haar shingaar lagaa

eh baundal gaiyaN dachiyaN
kit vall rahiyaN dhaa?


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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #3 on: June 26, 2013, 09:58:07 AM »
CHABIYAALAN
sun bhaine pardesane
assiN aaiyaN nadiye jaa
ikk yodhe de naauN te
lakh deewe parwaah

ajj janam dihaDa us da
ajj dile thiN chaa
asiN raaje varman veer de
rahiyaN shagan mana

sir te gadve neer de
taze full tuDa
asiN mahliN raani kunt de
challiyaN roop saza

jithe raaja namwasi
vatne lakh lagaa
itar, fulelaN,kewaDe
ganga-jali rala

is toN pichhoN hovsi
dadha a jugg mahaN
saare chambe desh choN
kaale murg manga

ik so ikkii bhed thiN
kita jaau jibha
raja kot siyal da
aaiya painde gaah

jo saade mahraaj da
baniya dharam bharaa
jo salwaan kahawnda
karsi rasam adaa

vaddhu bhedaaN saariyaN
loha saane la
vaggu sooha shookda
lahuaaN da dariya

chambe di is dhart te
desi rang chaDa
mathhe tikke laaun di
hosi rasam ada

naubat,kailaN,daffalaN
desan shor machaa
aasan bhand, maraasiye
bhat surangi chaa

hosan dhamaN bhaariyaN
degaaN chull chaDa
aNt vich mutiyaar ikk
chunsi raja aa

saare chambe desh choN
jis da husan athaah
oh sohni mutiyaar fir
gore hath uTha

karsi raaje vaaste
devi kol duaa
devi varman veer te
rahmat eh farma

saare chambe desh di
is nu ummar laga
fir raja us kuDi da
dharmi baap bula

ikk khuha, do bauliyaN
desi naam luaa
aaiya chambe shehar thiiN
kull mulakhiyaa dhaa

aao rahio lai chaliye
je dekhan da chaa

NATI
na ni bhaine meriye
assaN jaana door bada
aje paindaa vaang saraal de
kinna hor piya
    (chambiyalana hasdiyaN hasdiyaN
       chaliyaaN jaandiyan han)


SOOTARDHAAR
hune si vagdi paun de
sandli sandli saah
hune si mehkaN kheD diyaN
gal chanan de dhaa

hune si rishmaN suttiyaN
sarvar sej vichaa
hune taN dharat swarg si
hune taN narak bhaiya

vetarani vich badal giya
shook reha dariya
eh kii han chambiyalana
gaiyaN gall suna
kad lahuaaN nu dol ke
marde paap bhalaN?

NATI
eh manav de kojh da
kojha ikk paDa
jaan paraai kohe kad
vadhadi umar bhalaN

pran paraaye khohe kad
milda rabb bhalaN?
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Rashmi Sharma

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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #4 on: June 27, 2013, 11:07:45 AM »
SOOTARDHAAR
kiriya kehi awalaDi
kujh bhi samajh na aa
je vee dharti jamadi
aape jaandi khaa
jiuN makaDe sang makaDi
pahle bhog rachaa
garbhvati muD  hoe ke
jaandi us nu khaa

NATI
dharti di gall soch ke
man na karo bura
eh janani hai paap di
eh papaN di jaah

paap taN is da karam hai
is da paap subhah
je eh paap kamaaye na
taaN ajje mar jaa
aao muDiye parlok nu
mehakaN de par laa
hun taaN dhupaN uggiyaN
giya sooraj sir te aa
ghul jaaiye vich mehak de
ghul jaaiye vich vaa
     (sootardhaar te nati alop ho jaande han)


DOOJA ANKK
param, parwati te pushapa de na





kall da dihuN i kaisa dihuN si
kaisi si us di khushboi
apniaN aap golaiyaN chummadi
bhar joban vich naar jiuN koi









raje verman de janam -divas da uttsav samapat hon uprant us toN
agle din raja salvaan te raja varman aapo vich baiThe gallaN kar rahe han

                   
                               SALWAAN

kall da dihuN Vi
kaisa dihuN si
kaisi si
us di khushboi
apniaN aap golaiyaN chummadi
bhar joban vich
naar jiuN koi !

par ajj da dihuN
kaisa dihuN hai
kaisi hai,
is di khushboi
raat uninda bhogan pichhoN
jiweiN vesvaa sutti koi!

VARMAN

haN mitar !
kujh dihuN hunde ne
mathe jinhaN na sooraj koi
joon nadhuppi,
hundiyaN vi  par
kade jinhaN di dhupp na moi

unjh taN,
har dihuN mehak-vihuna
koi koi par
deve khushboi

jehDe dihuN da tan mehkila
soiyo saadi umaraa hoii
he rajan, he yodhe, soore
par aisi kii
baat hai hoi?
kall de dihuN toN
ajj de dihuN tak
sai janamaN di doori hoi

SALWAAN

he mere mittar
meet pyaare
he chambiyal desh de raaje
soota sooraj
kaun jagawe ?

je koi kall da sooraj mode
oh mere sabh sooraj khaave
jiuN jiuN koi,
sooraj banada
kachi agg di umar handhave

kinjh bolaN
kih baat karaN maiN ?
jeebh meri nu lajjiya aawe
je lajjiya nu
andar rakhadaN

je lajjiya nu
bahar rakhdaN
mera sooraj marda jaawe
maithoN dhupp,
 faDi na  jaawe

VARMAN

sun sajjan!
sun mittar yodhe
har mathe vich sooraj hove
har dhupp,
garabhvati hai dhur toN
us di kukh vich saaiya rove

us di dhupp,
kade na mardi
jihda koi parchhawaN hove
je teri,
dhupp da parchhawan
jeebh teri te aan khalove

taN sambhav hai,
teri dhupp vi
taitho be-mukh kadi na hove
dhupp taN,
mardi hai us vele 
jad koi chanaN vich aan khalove
jaaN nainaN vich neendar hove
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #5 on: June 28, 2013, 10:15:17 AM »
SALWAAN
haN sajjan!
mainu neend aa gai
haN sajjan
main sauna chahunda
din-diwiN, bhar siikhar dupahire
sooraj kite bujhana chahunda

har dihuN, meri neend da pinda
agan-sarpani ne dangiya hai
har dihuN mera,
par ang chhoh paa ke
hoi garbhvati de vaakan
lajjiya sang bhijiya langiya hai

har dihuN mera,
same di sukki sooli uppar
sootak-root toN hi tangiya hai
haN haN sajjan,
main kehndaN
main jagraate da thal langhiya hai

thakk tut ke ajj jeebh meri ne
neendar da ikk ghutt mangiya hai
haN sajjan,
mainu neend aa gaii
haN sajjan,
main sauna chahundaN

haN haN main hun ,
sauna chahunda
apne parchhaawein di chhaawein
mere parchaawein de bhaawein
puttar taawein taawein

mere,
parchhaawein di chhaawein
koi panchhi na gaawe
mere parchaawein nu bhaawein
tuN bhi ang na laawein
par main,
fir vi sauna chahunda
apni dhupp di chhawein

haN sajjan,
sabh apni dhupp nu
dhupioN chhaawein karde
apni dhupp da apne hathiN
cheer-haran han karde

dihuN de gaz,
umar da kapaDa
min min saare marde
sabhe chhaaN de jaal vichha ke
nindraaye pal faDade
nindraaye haN saare jammade
nindraaye hi marde


VARMAN
Theek asiN haN
sabh nindraaye
sabh unindi joone aaye
agan-birchh lunje, be-pattare
sabhanaN apni neendar khatir
dehiyaN di 
valgan vihh laaye
te us thalle
patt vichhaye

fir vi saanu neend na aaye
saadi chhaN nu
saadi dhupp hi
kai vaari na ang chhuhaye

par mittar
he mere sajjan
jeebh teri koi baat taN paaye
bol kulehane,
neendar wale
kyon tere hoThaN te aaye?

SALWAAN
ki paawaN
main baat pyaare ?
jinhaN khuhaN de paani khaare
kade na panghat
banan vichaare

VARMAN
aakhir aisa,
dukh vi ki hai?
dukh taN panchhi uddan haare
ajj is Dhaare
kall us Dhaare

SALWAAN
sun sajjan
taN baat sunandaN
dukhaN waali
agg jalaandaN
agg nu apni jeebh chuhandaN

beet gaye nu,
vaaj maar ke
moye sooraj moD liayunda
apni dhupp da
nagar vikhaunda

main jo dhupp vihanji
rang-vihuni si
agg chaudal de chulle
sekoN ooni di
pooran di aaN ichharaN
roop-vihuni si
agg di sappani
par mere ghar sooni si

agg di sappni
jad vihaDe vich aan vaDI
lakh bachaaiya aap
par oh roz laDi
nasha jeha nitt aaiya
par na vis chaDi

naar mere antar di
us toN nahi mari
an-chaahiyan vi,
dangaN di par peeD jari
maithoN supane di sappani
na gai faDi

mere supane di sappani
jehreeli si
uggade dihuN de
rangaN vaang rangili si
madh di bhari
katori vaang nashili si
niri si agg di laat
baDi chamkili si
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #6 on: July 01, 2013, 11:26:15 AM »
maiN chahiya,
supane di sappani maar diyaN
maiN chahiya,
ke us da roop visaar diyaN
sochaaN vaali,
addi heTh litaR diyaN
agg di sappani khatir
supana saaR diyaN

par supane di
sappani maithoN mari nahi
jiuN jiuN maare mantar
tiuN tiuN hor laRhi
ese dukh sang laRhde
meri dhupp dhali

kai vaari maiN chahiya
rishta toRh diyn
agg di sappani
baabal de ghar moRh diyaN
te aape nuN,
sunjhaN de sang joRh diyaN

par har sappani da baabal
nirdosha hai
har dhee da rang
har baabal lai kosa hai
har dhee,
har baabal di
pagg da ToTa hai

es desh di  har dhee da,
mastik  khoTa hai
eho gallaN kardi
umara Turi gai
geeTe vaakin haTh di nadiye
ruRhi gaii
har ikk chaa di,
nukkar aakhir bhuri gaii
jit vall muRh gaye paani
ut vall muRhi gaii

supane di sappani da
supana TuT giya
maithoN mera,
balda sooraj khuss giya
full mere baagaN da
sooha buss giya
maiN aapne hi,
parchhawein sang russ giya

main sooraj saaN,
par kaalakh di joon handhaai
agg di sappani nu par dukh di
mehak naa aai
main vi vedan di us agge
baat na paaii
sauN rahi meri chandan-deh sang
deh chipkaai
maiN jaagaN us neendar aaii




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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2013, 11:31:11 AM »
rukh nipattre,
neendar de nuN full aa lagga
neendar wala rukhaRha mainu,
hariya lagga
agg di sappani di kukhoN
mainu sooraj labha

nirloyaa, mera jiwan mainu
jawaala lagga
par oh sooraj,
mere matthe kade na lagga
aTharaN varhe lai ohdi lo nuN
jandara vajja
mera puttar pooran
mainu kade na labhaa

main muRh chhaaN di 
joon hanadanda sochan lagga
nahuaN de sang,
gam diyaN kabaraN khodan lagga
karmaaN di kaalikh nuN
mar mar bhogan lagga

sochan lagga,
ki dharti te joon handaani
agg di nadiyoN,
jiuN bukkaaN thiN peena paani
kujh peena,
kujh kir jaana,
ras virlaaN taani
atripati te lajjiya de,
kaale kamare vich
ikk dooje de ang valas ke
agani khaani
jiyuN sooraN di,
firdi dhaani

VARAMAN

haaN mittar!
tuN sach kehanda hain
agg bin agg di umar handhani
jiun jeewe machhi bin paani
har baalan nuN
agg banan lai
paindi hi hai aggani khaani
unjh taN har agg
agga hundi hai,
chulle bale jaN maDiN-masaani,

par jo agg na
laambu banadi
oh agg hundi darad-ranjhaani
je ichharaaN vi,
kachi agg si
taaN si fookaN naal maghaani
jaaN us te pa denda paani
haddaaN taaiN ghun hundi hai
do chitti di,
joon handhaani

unjj taN mittar
meet piyaare
har koi kachi agg nu khaawe
baladi agg nu vi, har koi
kachii keh ke,
umar langhaave
har baladi agg,
chumman pichhoN
kachii agg da roop vataave
supane di,
sappani vi ikk din
agg di sappani,
hi ban jaawe

SALWAAN

supane te,
agg di sappani vich
mere mittar antar hundai
agg di sappani sada paaltu
usda hath vich
mantar hundai
je supane di sappani dange
us da ant,
bhiankar hundai

agg di sappani je hai shola
taaN oh ikk basantar hundai
agan-sarpani,
jiunda sach hai
chetan-deh da kankar hundai
supan sarpani,
jhooTh, nirarthak
supane daa ikk jantar hundai

VARMAN

sajjan! dost !
bahadur bande
supane toN koi sach ki mange
saadi umara taaN langh jaaye
par soopane di,
audh na langhe
eh saade dhur andar kidhare
puThe chamgidaRhaN vatt Tange
kaale rukh, kismataaN vaale
te fal khaande rang-barange
koi koi supana karamaaN seti
kade kade sach ban ke langge

kise kise chehare choN saanu
supan-sarpani,
aa ke dange
us da dangiya kujh na mange
mange taaN, ohdi chhoh nu mange
din-diiviiN jaN souna mange

par naa chhoh,
na sauna milda
umar asaadi dhukh dhukh langge
saadi deh hi, saade saah toN
ikk din niwiN paa ke langge
saada sooraj
saathhoN sangge



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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #8 on: July 04, 2013, 06:06:58 AM »
SALWAAN
haaN mittar !
tooN sach kehnda hain
hun taaN sooraj,
dhal challiya si
dhupp da baalan bal chaliya si
supan-sarpani wala supana
hun mitti vich
ral chaliya si

par kall supana aakhiN takk ke
mainu muRh ke chhal chaliya hai
meri mehak-vichhuani rooh te
muRh koi chetar
mal chaliya hai

VARMAN
main vadd -bhaaga
is mitti choN
je tainu tera supana labhe
kehaRhi roopvati hai aisi
mainu bhi kujh pata taN lagge?

SALWAAN
haaN mittar! oh kiran jehi jo
sut uninde nainaN waali
koh koh lamme wallaN waali
neem-udaase angaN waali
dudhiN dhote rangaN waali
lamm-salammi chandan-gelli
bhaare jehe nitambhaN waali
moti-vanne dandaN waali
loona !
jehaRhi kall utsav vich
chuni si yuvti sangaN waali
supan-sarpani dangaN waali

VARMAN

LOONA............ !
baaru shoodar di dhee ?
sohani, chanchal, komal aangi
par pichhale janamaN da fal hai
jiweiN appachharaN, par bhitt-angi
madhara de vich jiuN jal-gangi
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #9 on: July 12, 2013, 12:58:27 PM »

shudddar naar kise raaje di
sambhav na hove ardhangi

SALWAAN

je loona,
shoodar di dhee hai
nirdoshi da dosh bhi kii hai?

VARMAN
dosh !
dosh ta us de karmaN da hai
ja fir pichhle janamaN da hai

SALWAAN
nahiN nahiN!
kujh dosh na usda
dosh taaN saade bharmaN da hai
jaN fir saade dhdharmaN da hai
dharm,
jo saanu eh kehnde ne
mandaraN de vich saNkh vajaavo
vaTTiyaN de vich shardha rakho
pattharaN agge dhoof dhukhaavo
par je maanav, marda hove
marde munh vich boond na paavo

ikk dooje de,
lahuaaN de vich
aapne  aapne hath dubavo
aunde maanav joga ralke
khetiN rajj ke kojh ugaavo
tawareekh di chhaati utte
rangaN waale naag ladaavo
samiyaN de shamshaan ghaat te
apni apni maRhi banaavo

kehRha, dharam
te kehRha rang hai
sangmarmar de khutve laavo
dharam, taaN mere mittar uh oh hai
jo na lahu da rang pachhaane
jo sabhanaN nu ikk kar jaane
maanav di peeRha nu samjhe
maanav di peeRha nu jaane

asiN taaN sajjan !
sabh shoodar haaN
bhitt-ange te suhaj-vihune
vakh-vakh lahuaaN de rang lai ke
dharmaaN vehRhe kariye toone
karam-vichhunne janam vihune
uttoN miThe,
vichoN loone

kall jo mittar,
dihuN mariya si
ki oh muRh ke ajj mar sakdai?
jaaN jo kall nu marnaa haale
kise bhi heele ajj mar sakdai?
ajj da dihuN taaN,
sajjaN mere
ajj chaRh sakdai, ajj mar sakdai
beete janamaaN de karmaaN da
dosh kise sir kinj chaRh sakdai?
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #10 on: July 17, 2013, 01:16:04 PM »
jo mariya,
so mar chukka hai
jo jiunda so mar jaawega
jaN jo jammana bhi hai haale
oh bhi sooraj Thar jaawega
bhoot, bhawikh da naag na sambhav
ajj di dhupp nuN
laRh jaawega

VARMAN
manndaN, dhupp nu naag na laRhsi
ajj da dihuN na
us toN marsi
par karmaaN de naagaN agge
koi maandri
kikan khaRhsi ?

karam taN aise naag zreele
jo samiyaN toN jaan na keele
eh janamaN tak pichha karde
kise vi heele, kise vaseele
asiN, jaN kukh di,
joon handhaande
eh taN uthe vi aa jaande
asiN janamiye
eh jamm painde
eh saade mathe vich rehnde
nitt saadi, kismat nuN dangde
viss gholde,
mauj mannaNde

SALWAAN
eh tooN nahiN
tera bharam boldai
tera seemat dharam boldai

VERMAN
je eh mera,
bharam boldai
jaaN koi seemat dharam boldai
taN maiN kehndaN,
tere andar,
kaam-samuNdar piya khauldai
supne di sappni da kala
tere andar
zahir boldai

SALWAAN
nahiN, nahiN,
eh kaam nahi hai
mere andar taN mere sajjan
koi aisa,
shaitan nahi hai

mere andar taN mere mittar
sadaa bagaawat hai ikk dhukhadi
kyon dharam de naaN te duniya
ikk dooje de munh te thukkadi
kyon maanav nuN nafarat kardi
jammi maanav de hi kukh di
bharmaaN waale viuah-chakkar toN
kyon kar is di jaan na chhuttdi
baaki supan -sarpani baare
maiN mere mittar
tarla paaNdaN
maiN taN variyaaN toN mere sajjan
dhupp chaawaN di joon handaNdaN
je meri jholi dhupp naa paai
aapna sooraj aap bujhaandaan
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #11 on: July 19, 2013, 01:09:44 PM »
VARMAN
mere sajjan
eh ki kehndaiN ?
bhit-angi lai niwaN paundaiN
tuN us nu ardhangi na chun
mil sakdai baaki jo chahundaiN
bhit-angi da sucha pinda
aa jaNda hai
je tu kehndaiN

SALWAAN
nahiN, nahiN,
maiN eh nahiN chahunda
na aisa maiN paap kamaaiyai
na aisa maiN paap kamandaN
maiN taN supan-sarpani da bus
janam janam lai
saath haaN mangdaN
janam janam lai saath chahundaN
                          (raje varman di patani kuNt kamre ch parwesh
                              kardi hai te varman nuN sambodhan kardi hai)


KUNT
namaskaar, hoe swaami mera
baaraN ohle khaDi khaDi maiN
sun chukki
vikhiyaan bathera
mere swaami,
neer je ganda
ganga taaiN aa mil jaawe
oh saara ganga kehlaawe
poojan-haara hi ho jaawe
kiyon sambhav na ,
jekar loona
veer mere de laD lagg jaawe
kiyuN kar muD,
shoodar kehlaawe ?

VARMAN
chaatik suaat boond hi peeve
oh taN ganga kade na jaawe
lakh pawittar hovan paani
oh taN us nu jeebh chuaawe
beshak kaag ne kaale hunde
par koi,
koiyal na kehlaawe

KUNT
be-shak,
koiyalaN , kaag na kaale
par koiyalaN de bachchpaale
sambhav hai,
veere ghar loona
muD ke bujhiya
sooraj baale
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #12 on: July 28, 2013, 11:10:09 AM »
VERMAN
maiN chahunda,
sooraj bal jaawe
par khaure kiyuN
lajjiya aawe
udhe-puriye
kii aakhange?
ichhraan taaiN jamman waale
dardaaN
koi haraf na aawe

SALWAAN
harf tusaN te
tad aawega
jad salwaan bhi mar jaawega

VERMAN
eh ichharaaN sang,
bhi aniya hai
oh tere
vehaDe di chhaaN hai
te tere puttar di maaN hai
naari jad ikk
maaN ban jaawe
naari nahi
be-jeebhi gaaN hai

KUNT
naari, nar da
oh gehana hai
nar de gal vich
taaN rehna hai
je nar nuN,
us moh laina hai
par je,
nar nuN moh nahi sakdi
taaN oh naari
ho nahi sakdi
agan-sarpani ho sakdi hai
supan sarpani ho nahi sakdi
ehde naaloN agan-sarpani
changa hai
jekar mar jaawe
muD naari di,
joon na aawe

VERMAN
kunte!
par har agan-sarpani
supan-sarpani
vi hai hundi
je ikk akkh lai 
nira kojh hai
dooji de lai
suhaj hai hundi
ratti di neeNdar choN
har naari
supana hai hundi
par je tusiN
baDe ichhak ho
kaho maNtari taaiN jaa ke
baaru de ghar,
jaa kah aawe,
ke oh dhee da,
kaaj rachaawe
te mere
mittar laD laawe
jo maNge,
so bakhshish paawe
      [saare uTh ke chale jaaNde han]
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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #13 on: August 04, 2013, 11:00:59 AM »
teeja ank
(seeta te geeta de naaN)


maiN agg turi pardes ni saioN,
agg turi pardes
ikk chhaati meri haaD tapanda
dooji tapada jeTh


loona te salwaan da viaah ho giya hai. loona apniyaan
do saheliyaN eera te mathari naal apne ghar de ikk kamare ch
vich baiThi vihondaR bastar paaii, sauhre -ghar tur jaan toN
pehlaan gallaN kar rahi hai

      LOONA
maiN agg turi pardes
ni saioN,
agg turi pardes
ikk chhaati meri haaD tapanda
dooji tapada jeTh
ni maiN agg turi,
pardes

agg di umare
har agg turadi
jaa behndi pardes
har agg de, baabal de chulle
sada na usda sek
har agg de ,
baabal di jaaii
tur jaaye door hamesh
eh kii agg de lekh
ni saiyoN
eh kii agg de lekh ?
har ghar di,
kanjak di aawe
jad vi agan-vares
har baabal di neend gawaache
balda vehaDa dekh
har baabal,
var dhoondan jaawe
har agani de mech
har agg hi, chhadd jaawe saiyoN
har baabal da desh
laa taliyaaN te
baldi mehndi
paa ke agg da ves
ni maiN agg turi pardes

par saiyoN,
maiN kaisi agg haaN
kaise mere lekh
ikk taaN mukh da, sooraj balda
dooje thal pairaaN de heTh
teeje baiThi,
machadi deh de
agan-birachh de heTh
fir vi saiyoN,
bujhda jaanda
is agani da sek
jo baabal var dhoond liyaaiya
so naa aaiya mech
ni maiN agg turi,
pardes









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Re: LOONA.......SHIV KUMAR BATALVI
« Reply #14 on: August 08, 2013, 11:37:03 AM »
EERA
saiyeiN!
agg di jeebh na hundi
bol na bol kabol
agg da karam nahin ke bole
aapni jeebhoN bol
agg taN sada,
aboli jammadi
mardi sada abol
je agg bole theeye kalanki
jagg na dhukada kol
chull paraaii
hadd baalne
deni umaraN rol
bheetaN pichhe bah bah rona
laine athharu dohl
es desh di,
har agg rogan
vekho nbjaaN phol
lahu thhukke te addiyaN ragRe
phir bhi rahe abol
eho har ikk agg di poonji
aad-jugaadoN kol
saiyoN agg di jeebh na hundi
bol na bol kabol

LOONA
saiyoN ni,
agg kyoN na bole?
jeebh da jandra kyoN na khole?
saane jeebh lavaa har agni
maiN chaundi haaN
uchchi bole
kaDak-damni saahiN ghole
aisi kadake, aisi kadake
satte asmaanaN de kann patan
aji- ravan di ,
dharti dole,
goonjan sabhe disha dishavaaN
har chulle di
agani khaule
saaR fook de boohe banne
hoe zulam de varke folle
kyoN koi saade agan sek nu
ikk muTh kangani badle
tolle?

EERA
sun ni aRiye,
bhaina loona
kis teri budh nu keeta toona
agg da pinDa
sada hai loona
agg da hanjhu
sada aloona
har agg di akkh
har ikk sadiye
eho an-bidh moti soona
aapna jammiya  aape peena
par is agg ne
kade na koona

LOONA
eh mera
vishvaas hai eere
ikk din agg avash koovegi
har agg di akkh
hanjhu di thhaaN
baldi baagi ratt soovegi
jo aadam,
agg khane keeRe
da abhimaan
avash loohvegi

EERA
nahiN nahiN
eh sambhav naahiN
agg de lekhi sada ne aahi
agg diyaN
aadam- jaaye de bin
sadaa najindiyaaN nirbal baahiN
pushto-pushti
agg saraapi
eh marraaN us dhur dargaahiN
oh aadam nu
janam devegi
dushman paalu aapni baahiN
agg da dharam
sadaa hai balana
kade bagaavat kardi naahiN
chaahe,
pooja lai koi baale
jaaN koi baale
vich kuraahin
agg nu,
agg di maaN da var hai
sataviN koThi charkhaa DaahiN





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