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Taish

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Unexplainable Feelings...!!
« on: July 27, 2013, 09:26:35 AM »
An incomplete poem or may be complete i dunno which was written in 2005....


deep,in my heart,
i have some pain.
don't ask me why,
i can't explain.

it has hurt me,
so deep.
that i want but,
can't weep.

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Re: Unexplainable Feelings...!!
« Reply #1 on: July 31, 2013, 04:09:13 AM »
aahhhhhh........

it has hurt me,
so deep.
that i want but,
can't weep.

same here......... ossum poem taish.. few words yet expressed beautifully... feelings heart touching.......

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Re: Unexplainable Feelings...!!
« Reply #2 on: July 31, 2013, 11:48:51 AM »
An incomplete poem or may be complete i dunno which was written in 2005....


deep,in my heart,
i have some pain.
don't ask me why,
i can't explain.

it has hurt me,
so deep.
that i want but,
can't weep.

realy deep feelings god bless u
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Re: Unexplainable Feelings...!!
« Reply #3 on: August 01, 2013, 02:30:33 AM »
An incomplete poem or may be complete i dunno which was written in 2005....


deep,in my heart,
i have some pain.
don't ask me why,
i can't explain.

it has hurt me,
so deep.
that i want but,
can't weep.


Quite much effective Taish. Few words and all of them are bind together to express their meaning collectively and completely. Definitely if I had seen these words ever before, i say u havn't improved much yet. :)

Keep going buddy
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Kah ke mujh ko ghadi se baandh diya

Taish

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Re: Unexplainable Feelings...!!
« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2013, 04:58:55 PM »
aahhhhhh........

it has hurt me,
so deep.
that i want but,
can't weep.

same here......... ossum poem taish.. few words yet expressed beautifully... feelings heart touching.......




the pleasure is all mine maam, to know that you liked it, hope to write even more in English, which may please you...!!

Taish

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Re: Unexplainable Feelings...!!
« Reply #5 on: August 03, 2013, 03:48:55 PM »
An incomplete poem or may be complete i dunno which was written in 2005....


deep,in my heart,
i have some pain.
don't ask me why,
i can't explain.

it has hurt me,
so deep.
that i want but,
can't weep.

realy deep feelings god bless u

thank u maam, nice to know u were ablo get the meaning in it...!!

Taish

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Re: Unexplainable Feelings...!!
« Reply #6 on: August 04, 2013, 06:21:22 AM »
An incomplete poem or may be complete i dunno which was written in 2005....


deep,in my heart,
i have some pain.
don't ask me why,
i can't explain.

it has hurt me,
so deep.
that i want but,
can't weep.


Quite much effective Taish. Few words and all of them are bind together to express their meaning collectively and completely. Definitely if I had seen these words ever before, i say u havn't improved much yet. :)

Keep going buddy

thanks for teh compliments mate, but on a serious note I am a bit confused that I should be happy with what you have said or sad... :P