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Rashmi

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shayad maiN tar jaati
« on: July 21, 2013, 05:49:47 PM »
Yeh kvita maine aaj se 15 sall pehle likhi thi jab hum bus duara 15 din ki (Patiala se Ujjain ,Bombay hote hue shri nadeRh sahib )yattra pe gae the .jb hum Bombay se bheema Shankar ja rahe the….tab is rachna ka janam hua……

Chottian ye parwaton ki ,ye haseen vaddian
Atkhelian karta hai man dekh kar ye ghatiyaan

Parwaton par sookha ghass, jo sunehri tarron jaisa
Gori ki chunnar sunehri, deta kuch aabhaas essa

Ghatiyon me khili dhoop, parwaton pe parchaiaN
Kahin Ghana kohra,kaise umad aai badriaN

Kaise karu main sajda usko ,
Kaise karu main shukria ?

Kaadar ke iis jalwe ka .
chhaaya ajab hai ye nasha

Chanchal man maiN sambhal na paun,
Daaman meiN madhoshiaN

Sheetal pawan jab lehar-2 kar
Karti hai sargoshiaN

Sundarta ki devi
shayad aa gai is roop me

chhaaya hua ullaas bhi
is sondarya anoop meaiN

vo dekho jal-dhaara nikli
kessar hai jaise ghula hua

savachh, pak, nirmal gagan
lo dharti se mila hua

kis taraf najreiN uThauN ?
drishya dekhuN kounsa?

rang main uske samaj na paun
adhbhut uski har chhata

manav jiwan aisa jiwan
bandisheiN hi bandisheiN

bandishoN ko toRh
puri hoti nahi khawhisheiN

sochti hoon, koyal hoti
baith aam ki daal kookti

kash main hoti koi badria
kabhi yahaN kabhi vahaN dolti

ya main hoti koi chidiya
fudak fudak main geet sunaati

kisi peRh  ki shaakha hoti
sang pawan main sur milaati

or nahi to raakh hi hoti
jab bhi paawan kadam koi paRhta

us se shayad main tar jaati
us se shayad main tar jaati…..
« Last Edit: July 22, 2013, 03:30:55 AM by Rashmi »
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Re: shayad maiN tar jaati
« Reply #1 on: July 23, 2013, 06:10:40 PM »
Shayad ye tabhi likhi ja sakti thi... Ab aiisa kuch nazar nahi aata... Koe puraani khoobsurat tasveer samne rakh di ho jaise
ji vikas shukriya meri is tasveer ki sundarta aap tak pahunchi  is se bad kar kya ho sakta hai --par waadiyoN meiN sundarta aaj bhi hai yahaN tak manushya ke haath nahi pahunche atikraman ke liye
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Re: shayad maiN tar jaati
« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2013, 05:26:48 PM »
humey bhi vahi laga jo fikr ji e kaha same here

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Re: shayad maiN tar jaati
« Reply #3 on: July 26, 2013, 10:31:05 AM »
 :) :) madhur ji fir humaara jawaab bhi wohi hai ji pahle wala
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Re: shayad maiN tar jaati
« Reply #4 on: July 29, 2013, 11:40:01 AM »
di yun lag raha hai aapke sath main bhi usbus k safar me thi aur ye sab dekh aur mehsus kar rahi thi... behad khubsurat chitran kiya hai aapne is nazare ka

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Re: shayad maiN tar jaati
« Reply #5 on: July 30, 2013, 02:59:44 PM »
bahoot khoob kalam ka saudagar maan ke bhav appeni kalam se tasveeer bana ke ru ba ru kar dai sab ke  samenai sacha kalam ka saudagar voh he hai or aap ne voh kiya yah mayenai nahi rakheta ke aaj ya 15 saal phalai ...
Ye Dunia Mujhe Jane Ya Na Jane,
Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.

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Re: shayad maiN tar jaati
« Reply #6 on: August 01, 2013, 09:14:14 AM »
di yun lag raha hai aapke sath main bhi usbus k safar me thi aur ye sab dekh aur mehsus kar rahi thi... behad khubsurat chitran kiya hai aapne is nazare ka
  :)  samjho tum saath thi mere meri rooh meiN samaai hui-- bus meiN kya hum to janam-janamantaroN se saath haiN sweety--- tabhi to is janam meiN saath haiN :) aapki aankhoN ne ye haseen manjar meri aankhoN se dekha ---shukriya :)
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Re: shayad maiN tar jaati
« Reply #7 on: July 07, 2014, 06:42:07 PM »
bahoot khoob kalam ka saudagar maan ke bhav appeni kalam se tasveeer bana ke ru ba ru kar dai sab ke  samenai sacha kalam ka saudagar voh he hai or aap ne voh kiya yah mayenai nahi rakheta ke aaj ya 15 saal phalai ...
shukriyaa Anil ji :)
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale