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Rashmi

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nazaraN laggiyaN
« on: July 21, 2013, 10:12:32 AM »
Is rachana da janam us samein hoeya jado  asiN kujh dost ikk maksad lai ke ikathe hoe par kujh mat bhed hon kaaran 2 groups vich band gaye us samay di peed ne shabdaN nu kujh is tarah pargaT kita ........



saion ni saanu nazaraaN laggiyaN, nazar utaaro koi
aao ni koi mirchaaN baaro ,. nazar utaaro koi

ajj lagda mera murshad russiya, jaan meri ni koh ke sutiya
baar chhado koi loon di mutthi,nazar utaaro koi

dekho ni main dewaan duhaai, vich hizar de kamli hoi
laah kaalkh mathe te la deo, nazar utaaro koi

saion ni saanu nazaraN lagiiyan nazar utaaro koi

fatt jigar de haale alle ,par saadi koi pesh na challe
jakhman utte loon chhirhakiya rashmi' jhalli hoi

nazar utaaro koi ni saion nazar utaaro koi
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Re: nazaraN laggiyaN
« Reply #1 on: July 23, 2013, 02:46:02 PM »
bahooot wadiya tarikai naal pesh kitai hai dil de bhav
Ye Dunia Mujhe Jane Ya Na Jane,
Teri Ankhe Muje Pehchane Yahi Bahut Hai.

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Re: nazaraN laggiyaN
« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2013, 06:15:23 PM »
shukriya anil ji aas hai aagoN bhi tuhada saath injh hi milda rahega ji
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Re: nazaraN laggiyaN
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2013, 05:09:21 PM »
vadiya

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Re: nazaraN laggiyaN
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2013, 04:59:14 PM »
shukriya madhur ji aap is post pe aaye ji
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Re: nazaraN laggiyaN
« Reply #5 on: July 29, 2014, 06:26:45 PM »
waah waah waah... kya kehne...
bahot khoob... ek ek baat dil tak utar gayi.. jaise apni hi koi baat ho rahii ho
मोमिन न मैं फ़िराक न ग़ालिब न मीर हूँ
इक आग का गोला हूँ मैं अर्जुन का तीर हूँ

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Re: nazaraN laggiyaN
« Reply #6 on: August 08, 2014, 09:06:25 AM »
Aahaaa rashmii ji

Mzaa aa gya pd ke

Mirchaa baaron...tuhaadi vi koi nazar utaaro
zoya****

Lau  hi lau sii ..... saik nhi si
Vekh lya main jugnu phd ke
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