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Rashmi

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #15 on: June 25, 2013, 05:41:43 PM »
mujhe yaadoN ki saari tahniyaaN todne do tum,
jalaani haiN tamannaoN ki kitni hiN yahaaN laasheN...
very nice taish aaj aahna kahan hai.......

ye haq hai kaunsa jis se dard mujh ko diye jaao
au haq hai kaunsa ji se sahan kar looN chhupa ke maiN
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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #16 on: June 25, 2013, 06:23:14 PM »
ashkon ka samndar chhupakar apni  aankhon me
labon se kaliyan bikherte hain... hum aise jeete hain

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #17 on: June 25, 2013, 08:10:40 PM »
aapka jo adabi lehjaa hai,
mujhe bahut ahcha lagta hai...

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #18 on: June 26, 2013, 04:13:19 AM »
anjaane path par hum lamba jo chalte hain
baD jana aasaN hai muD aana hai mushkil
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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #19 on: June 27, 2013, 03:20:28 AM »
jism o rooh jahan ek ho jayen
ek aisa lamha hai tishnagi meri....

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #20 on: June 27, 2013, 03:23:49 AM »
Teri Palkon main rahungi raat bhar ke liye
Main ik khwaab hun, Subha ko chali jaungi...

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #21 on: June 27, 2013, 04:12:06 AM »
hai najuk dil pareshaN hum kisi ko kya bataaIN

haiN aansu bhi fariyadein kisi ko kya bataaiN
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
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haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

AahnaA

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #22 on: June 27, 2013, 10:33:35 AM »
jism o rooh jahan ek ho jayen
ek aisa lamha hai tishnagi meri....

Teri Palkon main rahungi raat bhar ke liye
Main ik khwaab hun, Subha ko chali jaungi...



Aahna kyaa baat hai.... Ab behr wazn pe dhyan dena shuru karo

mere likhte hi aap behr ko le aate ho fikr ji... meri soch hi band ho jati hai fir..... :(

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #23 on: June 27, 2013, 12:56:02 PM »
taish kyuN sunta kisi aur ki tu,
koi ghalib hai na hai meer yahaaN...

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #24 on: June 27, 2013, 01:05:02 PM »
ye jag ki reet kaisi hai, ya meri preet kaisi hai?
us ne hii hai rula dala jis ko chaha sada maine
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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #25 on: June 29, 2013, 02:45:50 PM »
Dil todne wale hamesha dil ke kareeb hote hai,
Dil tootne pe jo bhikar jaye  wo badnaseeb hote hain.

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #26 on: July 01, 2013, 06:46:37 AM »
gujarish hai mujhko dard or na do ...
dil ye vichaara gum kahaN tak sahega
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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #27 on: July 01, 2013, 10:20:51 AM »
Bewajah baat bad jaayegi, yun na dekho meri nighaaoN me tum...........!!!

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #28 on: July 01, 2013, 11:27:54 AM »
hum diljale ashiqon ka mat poocheye aalam,
unki yaad mein jo ashq bahe khud hi pee lete hardam.

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #29 on: July 01, 2013, 05:55:23 PM »
shav-o-sehar youn vabasta hain fikar se hum
vo kya jaane, kitne mutfakir hain.................
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale