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AahnaA

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Futkar sher
« on: June 22, 2013, 06:52:03 PM »
Pyare doston .. yahan hume un sheron ko post karna hai jo kisi gazal ka hissa nahin ban paye aur yunhi reh gaye akele ......

aap apne likhe sher hi post kar sakte hain aur kisi aur k likhe sher bhi post kar sakte yahan....


so lets start .........
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AahnaA

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #1 on: June 23, 2013, 06:16:06 AM »
Badi der se atki thi jo seene me..
Lo gai.... wo saans chhoot gai....

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2013, 08:58:07 AM »
Shakh se tootne pe gul bhi.to.roya hoga,
Ya sirf shakh  hi sisakti hai gul ke bichar jane pe.

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #3 on: June 23, 2013, 11:35:41 AM »
waahhhh kya baat hai humdum ji...


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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #4 on: June 23, 2013, 04:44:56 PM »
nam aankhoN se jo tera aqas dekha
badle badle se mujh ko nazar aaye
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #5 on: June 25, 2013, 09:13:30 AM »
meri pareshaani ka sabaab tum kya jaano
tum jo kahte ho khush mijaaj hain hum
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #6 on: June 25, 2013, 10:22:38 AM »
Main jis se pyar karta huN vo meri ho nahiN sakti,
Kahaani ishq se badh kar kahaani ho nahiN sakti...

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #7 on: June 25, 2013, 10:23:07 AM »
meri pareshaani ka sabaab tum kya jaano
tum jo kahte ho khush mijaaj hain hum


bahot ache di

Rashmi

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 11:07:36 AM »
Main jis se pyar karta huN vo meri ho nahiN sakti,
Kahaani ishq se badh kar kahaani ho nahiN sakti...
bahut khoob taish
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

Taish

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 11:38:14 AM »
Tang aa kar khuda ne badla libaas-e-mausam,
Khushgawaari ki ghalatfehmi na paali jaaye...

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KhaFA
« Reply #10 on: June 25, 2013, 04:36:41 PM »
मनाना मेरा शायद उन्हें बहुत अज़ीज़ लगता है,
बात-बे-बात ख़फ़ा होने का वो बहाना ढूँढते हैं..!
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MananA MerA shyeD unhE bahuT azeeZ LagtA hai,,
BaaT-Be-BaaT QhaFA honE Ka wo BaHaNA dhoodhtE hai.!

Mohd Haris :( :(

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #11 on: June 25, 2013, 05:07:21 PM »
shor andar ka mere kavita bane
log kahte hain ke wah kabool ka
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #12 on: June 25, 2013, 05:10:53 PM »
Tumne bhi gum diye hain tohfe meN,
MaiN bhi aansu khareed laaya hooN...

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #13 on: June 25, 2013, 05:23:50 PM »
bahut sundar........


mere man ka sakoon cheen ke jo chain mil jata
to ja ye bhi tamana aaj poori kar hi le too bhi
Rashmi Sharma

gooDe akkhar ,fatti sukki
adiyo meri gaachi mukki
sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale

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Re: Futkar sher
« Reply #14 on: June 25, 2013, 05:26:05 PM »
mujhe yaadoN ki saari tahniyaaN todne do tum,
jalaani haiN tamannaoN ki kitni hiN yahaaN laasheN...