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nigam.manoj

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geetkar
« on: July 14, 2013, 12:51:22 PM »
Meri ek nai kavita ap sabhi mittro ko samrpit hai.

Is kavita ko ek acchi nazar se pade our aanand le

Film city bomaby se Ek geet aaya ...

Geet ne darshko ko bahut
Hi lubhaya ....

Bah geet darshlo ko bahut
Hi bhaa raha tha ..

Kyu ki us geet  me baar baar Ek hi tark. (swal) aa raha
tha ....


Ki choli ke piche kya hai choli ke piche kya hai
choli ke piche kya hai...

Ham n bhi us geet ki dhjiyya udai ...

Our kuch kavita ki panktiya banai ....

Choli ke piche to chupa maa ka pyar hai ....

Isi choli ki badaoulat bana ye sara sansar
hai .......

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Re: geetkar
« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2013, 06:22:03 AM »
wahhhhh kya khuub kaha hai manoj ji......  har baat ko positively lein to kuch bura dikhe hi na sansaar me... too good

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Re: geetkar
« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2013, 07:24:46 AM »
sukriyaaaa aap ka . bahut bahut aap ne meri kavita ko saraha . thanksss
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Re: geetkar
« Reply #3 on: July 15, 2013, 10:28:14 AM »
interesting take hai saaheb, ahcha laga aapko padh kar, umeed karta hun age bhii aapko padhne ka aanand hume yunhi milta rahegaa....

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Re: geetkar
« Reply #4 on: July 16, 2013, 08:42:07 AM »
Sukriyaaa ap ka   agar aap savh mere hak me dua karte rahenge to aap sabhi ko mere post jarur milte rahege .aap sabhi ka bahut bahut sukriyaa aap sabhi ne meri kavita ko saraha
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Re: geetkar
« Reply #5 on: July 16, 2013, 09:33:25 AM »
badiya Manoj ek achhi soch ke liye mubaarak ho likhte rahiye khush rahiye
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sukke hanjhu akkhaN waale
haaDa! akkhar mooloN kaale